9 hours ago
very nice
really love the way you wrote story till date
initially lead character was danish ,but now it seems kavya took control ,and she is ready to do anything for danish ,and she even impressed danish father ,impressive
and also you described tradition beautiful ,according to me ,other details are equally important as sex details ,please include eveything kavya will do in next 15 days ,conversation ,emotion ,love etc
and please dont let danish father fuck kavya ,you whole story was based on love ,emotions
and kavya is in love with danish ,and ready to anything ,but if you allowed to let danish father fuck kavya ,then all your hardwork will do waste ,you took too much time to build emotions ,love bewteen danish and kavya and if eveyone will fuck kavya ,then this story will also become the one like others ,where 2 person love each other ,and then they have sex ,and writer introduce more 4-5 male character then allowed them to fuck ,just like a prostitute
im just telling you that your story is different ,you story story is focused on emotions and love ,not just one sex
waiting for next update
really love the way you wrote story till date
initially lead character was danish ,but now it seems kavya took control ,and she is ready to do anything for danish ,and she even impressed danish father ,impressive
and also you described tradition beautiful ,according to me ,other details are equally important as sex details ,please include eveything kavya will do in next 15 days ,conversation ,emotion ,love etc
and please dont let danish father fuck kavya ,you whole story was based on love ,emotions
and kavya is in love with danish ,and ready to anything ,but if you allowed to let danish father fuck kavya ,then all your hardwork will do waste ,you took too much time to build emotions ,love bewteen danish and kavya and if eveyone will fuck kavya ,then this story will also become the one like others ,where 2 person love each other ,and then they have sex ,and writer introduce more 4-5 male character then allowed them to fuck ,just like a prostitute
im just telling you that your story is different ,you story story is focused on emotions and love ,not just one sex
waiting for next update