[sexypreeti]

Thank you, 3 lagatar erotic updates ke baad, ho sakta hai agla wala thoda slow ho, par I think maine poori story end tak apne dimaag mein bana li hai... bas likhte likhte kayi baar thode changes ho jaate hai aur kuch part slow aur kuch jyada exciting ho sakta hai.

Maine shuru mein ek index bhi add kar di hai. I think Index add karte hue mujhe realize hua ki likhte likhte thodi writing better hui hai pehle se. Hopefully jo log shuru se end tak padenge unhe achi lagegi story.

Jo story aapke dimaag mein already hai uspe hi dhyan do... comments aur suggestions aate rahenge... but it is not mandatory to incorporate all/any of them and change what you had already planned...

All the best... This story is one of the best I have come across...I learnt a lot from your writing skills... Thank You  :)