Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

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The similarity with the Facilitator story is just a co incidence. As for the consequence part. There will be eventually , Sonarika's character is too engulfed in her dual life for the time being. She is not concerned about the consequences at the time being but eventually she will have to. With respect to the story , Sonarika is a career woman , her friend circle considers her as the successful bread winner of her family. Even on the job perspective , she is now on the highest post of her office while at the same time Hemant's character desired the high post but never got it. But that is also the part that makes Sonarika embrace her love towards Hemant because Hemant finds happiness with what he gets. He is a secret introvert , always there to support her. And even though that is not the desired qualities that Sonarika sees in her dream man , those qualities are what makes Sonarika forge with him. In short , both Hemant and Vikram provides Sonarika something in life. With Hemant she sees her ideal life partner , a family man. But with Vikram , she sees the dream man she would've wanted. And then comes the opinions from people surrounding her that culminated in her making a choice to seek an affair with Vikram. But that is also a part of her dynamic , Sonarika immediately hates Kunal because the way he is being treated when around Mouni. And with the affair happening with Vikram , she believes that Kunal might eventually influence Hemant and turn him into like Kunal. Her character is kind of a short fuse , a person that jumps to conclusions from the first go. She only corrects herself when others correct her , best example is the first meeting with law enforcement when Sonarika immediately chastised Hemant when she learned he didn't file a complaint not even giving him the time to explain himself. Only until she went to the station did she realize her mistake and she apologized. Conveniently , no one corrected her thought process in her emotions towards Vikram , which is why she eventually fell to an affair with him because she believed her emotions were leading her the right way. This is one of her character flaws that will eventually make her dynamic change to something different because her choices will affect her later on.

Also , I want to point out the way the story is implemented. The narration implies that Sonarika is the strength of her family. When there is trouble , she is the one standing in the front facing it on. While Hemant is the one that solves it calmly. But like the recent chapter states , Hemant is no saint in this story. He has lied to his life partner , a lie that he had created to protect himself and his family from his past. But now there is shift happening and this shift will result in new scenarios to emerge which will not only ruin lives but even put them in danger. Every characters , everything that has happened , they are all interwoven in a maze which results in one action affecting the other. What is Hemant's past? Who was the old man in the photo that makes him emotional? Will Sonarika be careful with her affair? Will she be able to keep her affair a secret? And moreover , what will Sonarika's reaction be if and may she ever finds out about Hemant's past? Only time will tell. 

One thing I can say is , next chapter will be more focused on the story progression than individual characters. Some big shifts will happen. Find out this saturday!

FYI , this week's delay happened because of the Champions Trophy Final , LOL. Thankfully there won't be one this weekend so if everything goes well. Chapter 6 will come by Saturday or Sunday.

 HARRY JORDAN 

I guess I am the only one who did not find it similar to the story The Facilitator, because the Happily married working wife falling in love and starting affair with her boss or with new cute guy in the office is actually very pretty common plot and not something new or unique plot, there are like tons of stories with same plot . I understand that we all have been following the same story so its natural for people to think that there is some similarity but there is not because the story is not about adultery . The whole affair part is like 25% of the story , its very minor part as of now and we dont know the real intention of Vikram maybe in future we might get some twist . So Maybe the writer choose that the Vikram should be someone whose background is not well known to the Protagonist because if He were her college sweetheart then She would have some idea about him , So introducing him as someone she does not know prior is perfect setup , As a client . There are like tons of character with proper background which justify their action. There are multiple plots going on . As of now only the 25% percent of the story is completed , There are 15 chapters more to come.

Yes , That is what i have been saying her circle is full of Toxic Women all of them are victim of Patriarchy ( which is fine based on their past trauma ) but there should be one or two character who also give her correct opinion like dont cheat on your husband or maybe someone whose first opinion about marital problems is not to cheat or seek an affair no matter how tempting the other man is . Just to balance the thing because Its like the whole story is on the shoulders of Men who are at fault and they accept their mistake and they are working to make themselves better but on the other side all of the women are Men hating , cheaters and always doing the opposite of Normal   . That is why i said we need a character completely opposite of Meghna , Just for contrast , It will bring some fun . I mean a women countering every shit Meghna says ( I do not hate the character but love these character these character works as rage bait lol you feel angry but also chuckle i just love these characters ) . ( Minor opinion , just for fun )

Hemant and Vikram provides Sonarika something in life. With Hemant she sees her ideal life partner , a family man. But with Vikram , she sees the dream man she would've wanted. And then comes the opinions from people surrounding her that culminated in her making a choice to seek an affair with Vikram. But that is also a part of her dynamic , Sonarika immediately hates Kunal because the way he is being treated when around Mouni. And with the affair happening with Vikram , she believes that Kunal might eventually influence Hemant and turn him into like Kunal. Her character is kind of a short fuse , a person that jumps to conclusions from the first go. She only corrects herself when others correct her , best example is the first meeting with law enforcement when Sonarika immediately chastised Hemant when she learned he didn't file a complaint not even giving him the time to explain himself. Only until she went to the station did she realize her mistake and she apologized. Conveniently , no one corrected her thought process in her emotions towards Vikram , which is why she eventually fell to an affair with him because she believed her emotions were leading her the right way. This is one of her character flaws that will eventually make her dynamic change to something different because her choices will affect her later on.

Yeah , This thing is confusing. 10 years of marriage and she still doesnt know Hemant. I mean to think that Hemant is gonna turn out like Kunal is absurd and then she herself turned hemant into something that she hated " cuckold" . Yes your short fuse argument explained her nature but still on the cheating part its little hard to believe that she fell for Vikram too easily and then she completely changed . No guilt no remorse but now she is ready to even ignore her family for Her lover and at same time excited about her Wedding Anniversary . You have created very complex situation , I am excited to see how you gonna treat it . 

What is Hemant's past? Who was the old man in the photo that makes him emotional? Will Sonarika be careful with her affair? Will she be able to keep her affair a secret? And moreover , what will Sonarika's reaction be if and may she ever finds out about Hemant's past? Only time will tell. 

Michael the Archangel was best part    ( It reminds me of Archangels from SUPERNATURALS , I mean I can easily imagine Hemant in The Image of Castiel but with Black Trench coat )
But in the last para you  painted the Image Of Hemant larger than life , I just wanna say that you should do justice with that Image . 

What is Hemant's past? Who was the old man in the photo that makes him emotional? Will Sonarika be careful with her affair? Will she be able to keep her affair a secret? And moreover , what will Sonarika's reaction be if and may she ever finds out about Hemant's past? Only time will tell.

I was about to ask this , Do we get more of Hemant's past ? His parents his childhood . Its gonna be interesting to see from where he came from and how he became who he was . 

Chapter 6 will come by Saturday or Sunday.

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Kudos to you .