Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[RCF]

Don't worry , I take no problem with your criticism. Matter of fact , now I can see there is some similarities with The Facilitator. In my defense it was strictly coincidence. When I was making the character of Vikram , my first approach was to bring him as a high college sweetheart of Sonarika or a co worker or boss but those traits are very common in every adultery themed and infidelity story. Eventually I decided to take this approach because in this way , I could build the attraction angle between them and showcase the chemistry in a more cinematic way. To be honest very soon their story might just take the back bench considering the shift that is about to come. I have only explored the "Love" and the "Sex" part , there is also a "War" part that has only been teased since the first chapter.

When that aspect comes in , the whole dynamic will shift and new scenarios will lead the story. Even though I wrote this story on the Adultery section. There is more to the story than just cheating spouses and infidelities. There will be betrayals , hurdles , character groeth , deconstruction among many factors. All I can say now is I am actually enjoying designing this story. 

So from my behalf , all kinds of criticisms are welcome. It will help me understand what the readers expect and help me craft better products in the future.

My intention is not to drag you back from writing story, The arc is eerily similar and also you have been advocating a glorious ending for hero in all other stories so felt you have written the story by keeping that ending in your mind so was asking you to bring lot of unpredictability into the story so even though your ending as planned is written but is justified and natural hence my comment, Unfortunately not all see that way and jump to conclusions. Anyways I like the writing style so far despite the similarities.

Thanks for the effort!

~RCF