Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

You have connected with the story and I find too many similarities with other stories here and felt the plot is being repeated a lot. What is so pathetic about it...And I criticized it very respectfully.

Everything I am reading about Sonarika and Vikram is very similar from Facilitator. I do not see my comment as bad, its a mere suggestion to bring more plot with unpredictability. Only reason I am replying to you is because I want you to read others comment and understand first before jumping guns and making silly arguments.

~RCF

Don't worry , I take no problem with your criticism. Matter of fact , now I can see there is some similarities with The Facilitator. In my defense it was strictly coincidence. When I was making the character of Vikram , my first approach was to bring him as a high college sweetheart of Sonarika or a co worker or boss but those traits are very common in every adultery themed and infidelity story. Eventually I decided to take this approach because in this way , I could build the attraction angle between them and showcase the chemistry in a more cinematic way. To be honest very soon their story might just take the back bench considering the shift that is about to come. I have only explored the "Love" and the "Sex" part , there is also a "War" part that has only been teased since the first chapter.

When that aspect comes in , the whole dynamic will shift and new scenarios will lead the story. Even though I wrote this story on the Adultery section. There is more to the story than just cheating spouses and infidelities. There will be betrayals , hurdles , character groeth , deconstruction among many factors. All I can say now is I am actually enjoying designing this story. 

So from my behalf , all kinds of criticisms are welcome. It will help me understand what the readers expect and help me craft better products in the future.