10-03-2025, 04:43 PM
Nice Update , But its too short 
, Please dont post update in multiple parts . Take you time and Post full update :) ( Just a suggestion )
One Criticism I have is , There is complete absence of Moral Female Characters ( I know its Erotic Forum , and I am not Moral policing or saying that everything and everyone should be moral and faithful etc etc
) . Like All the women Sonarika has encountered all of them pushed her to commit adultery , Not a single women warned her or tried to stopped her from committing adultery I mean if there are so many character there should be good characters or I would say Normal character , A Foil Character , Where as Male characters are Honest , Helpful, some what faithful also ( I know those are also corrupt) A character like complete opposite to Meghna should have add more fun to the story , I mean if all the characters are cheating in a story then there is no space for confrontation , fight , jealousy , remorse etc etc . All these emotions are necessary to drive a story . Also In many stories the women characters were always Feminist and they all supports cheating and always in favor of committing adultery 
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Also , I dont understand that why do people dont like Good characters in Erotic Stories. I mean Like A Foil Character .
Just my thought .
( This is short comment , will make another after Part 5 , Hope we can get more of Hemant in next update )
Peace out .
, Please dont post update in multiple parts . Take you time and Post full update :) ( Just a suggestion )One Criticism I have is , There is complete absence of Moral Female Characters ( I know its Erotic Forum , and I am not Moral policing or saying that everything and everyone should be moral and faithful etc etc
) . Like All the women Sonarika has encountered all of them pushed her to commit adultery , Not a single women warned her or tried to stopped her from committing adultery I mean if there are so many character there should be good characters or I would say Normal character , A Foil Character , Where as Male characters are Honest , Helpful, some what faithful also ( I know those are also corrupt) A character like complete opposite to Meghna should have add more fun to the story , I mean if all the characters are cheating in a story then there is no space for confrontation , fight , jealousy , remorse etc etc . All these emotions are necessary to drive a story . Also In many stories the women characters were always Feminist and they all supports cheating and always in favor of committing adultery . Also , I dont understand that why do people dont like Good characters in Erotic Stories. I mean Like A Foil Character .
Just my thought .
( This is short comment , will make another after Part 5 , Hope we can get more of Hemant in next update )
Peace out .
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