10-03-2025, 04:14 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-03-2025, 04:16 PM by Rocky@handsome. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Undoubtedly it's very good story...
Few suggestions please don't get me wrong please..
1) Please don't make the son cuck, it will spoil all eroticism and adventures
2) needs some serious editing coz ..sometimes it's very difficult to understand who is speaking- many times you are using "He" for female character and "She"for male characters..it's really confusing..
3) Hopefully u would narrate from Mom's POV- we can get the clear picture of Mom's feeling as well and we will get to know How it all started and the details of every encounter between Mom and Sam -Surely it would be much more interesting
Keep it up - once again would honestly like to say it's really really good story.
Best regards-
Keep updating❤️
Few suggestions please don't get me wrong please..
1) Please don't make the son cuck, it will spoil all eroticism and adventures
2) needs some serious editing coz ..sometimes it's very difficult to understand who is speaking- many times you are using "He" for female character and "She"for male characters..it's really confusing..
3) Hopefully u would narrate from Mom's POV- we can get the clear picture of Mom's feeling as well and we will get to know How it all started and the details of every encounter between Mom and Sam -Surely it would be much more interesting
Keep it up - once again would honestly like to say it's really really good story.
Best regards-
Keep updating❤️
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