Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

Man, Harry, the reason I wasn't reading your story is it resembles bits and pieces from other stories with plots identical to lot of them, and you were writing to prove a point and give hero worship to Hemanth at the end after his humiliation and suffering from his wife's betrayal. You have prepared a wealthy conquest ready to fall for Hemant and while twisting the tale for his wife to fall for Vikram.

Where's fun in that when you know the whole plot. Don't try writing stories to prove a point to other writers here...write for something unique. Just my 2 cents, also I wish you best in writing the story but I am out. I will say this though your writing is excellent and your effort to bring sex scenes to completeness is very good, we can literally see them and its refreshing.

~RCF

I appreciate your opinion about the story. Although I have to state , I don't have good guys and bad guys in the sense. I intend to adapt the "grayness" to my characters. And don't worry , the story isn't just about an extra-marital affair , there will be different themes that will walk in. There is a lot of character dynamic and different plot setting that will walk in. This early part of chapter 5 focused on Sonarika because I wanted to show her dynamic more in the story , really push onto her reasoning for her drive to seek an affair. I also have left some of the character's past unexplored because I want to reveal it on a different time.

I do not write this story with the intention of expressing my personal opinions about "cuckolding" ,  like I said there will be themes. Many of these themes will eventually come into this story and that will expand not only the characters in it but also the setting as well. My approach to this story is to start it like its a simple life story but then elements coming in and it transforms into a larger than life saga. Some of the inspirations for this story is from the novel A Histroy Of Violence one of my favorite literature. My intention is not to prove a point but to explore all this themes. For now the focus is the affair part because I wanted to explore the human emotions associated with it and Sonarika's character helps me in exploring it. Her duality is something I am going to explore now and in the future as well and her choices will eventually define her destiny on where this will take her in the future.