10-03-2025, 01:27 AM
Man, Harry, the reason I wasn't reading your story is it resembles bits and pieces from other stories with plots identical to lot of them, and you were writing to prove a point and give hero worship to Hemanth at the end after his humiliation and suffering from his wife's betrayal. You have prepared a wealthy conquest ready to fall for Hemant and while twisting the tale for his wife to fall for Vikram.
Where's fun in that when you know the whole plot. Don't try writing stories to prove a point to other writers here...write for something unique. Just my 2 cents, also I wish you best in writing the story but I am out. I will say this though your writing is excellent and your effort to bring sex scenes to completeness is very good, we can literally see them and its refreshing.
~RCF
Where's fun in that when you know the whole plot. Don't try writing stories to prove a point to other writers here...write for something unique. Just my 2 cents, also I wish you best in writing the story but I am out. I will say this though your writing is excellent and your effort to bring sex scenes to completeness is very good, we can literally see them and its refreshing.
~RCF
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