09-03-2025, 02:52 AM
(This post was last modified: 09-03-2025, 02:58 AM by RCF. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
(08-03-2025, 12:52 AM)krish_999 Wrote: First of all, I would like to thank all the dear members for appreciating my story and showering it with your thoughtful comments. Now that the story has ended, everything I intended to convey through it has been
Regarding the story, many readers had various doubts, but I’d like to leave it up to you. I mean, I shared Krish’s version of his life, but it could be very different from Meera’s perspective. Even Krish has to guess a lot of things, imagine, and connect the dots. It's similar to how we experience life, isn’t it? We rely on the visuals we have and the words others give us. That’s the essence of writing a story from one person’s point of view. There’s no opportunity to present Meera’s version because, as a writer, I don’t know it, and Krish doesn’t have access to it as a character. So, just like him, readers too have the right to guess and imagine the other side. As a writer, I’m happy with whatever you choose to imagine about this story.
I had previously mentioned writing a sequel to "The Accident", and I think that will be my next project. It will be a romance.
I also plan to write a story about seducing a neighbor. However, more than the sex aspect, the focus will be on how the man seduces a tough, committed woman. I just hope people don’t get overly motivated and decide to try seducing their neighbors after reading my story! Lol.
Keep reading. Keep posting.
Love. Krish.
Thanks for replying back to us and hope you recovered well enough now.
Also I would like to thank you for all your efforts for giving us this masterpiece. There is no story in this forum that comes close to your writing level and is perfect recipe for emotions, sex and betrayals with many twists and turns strategically weaved around the story to give the high needed to keep the readers glued to the plot.
Everything that was written despite some expectations from us still reached insane levels of epic storytelling. Give a thought as I mentioned earlier to open an account and start publishing these to Amazon readers. Over time you will find set of readers looking for your books there...giving you nice part time fun.
A perfect story as you have chosen would be to seduce a neighbor and it would be a masterpiece if its a long saga like this one. I am sure you will take it to insane levels. Your No Saint..is also one such story but the antagonist who tries to seduce his neighbor friend's wife Anvitha is not a good guy and I am thinking in your new story the guy is not that bad and he will surely succeed unlike Rajat. Can't wait for it to be started soon.
As for the comments from you on the story, very clever Krish ...really very clever like your story writing. It was a nice ploy to throw the perspectives on to us and asking us to imagine our own versions of what would it be and why would it be...The part I highlighted above is where I do not agree with you lol...I cannot believe for a min that you have no clue on what Meera thinks and how she thinks in every situation, with out that you could not have been able to write her hints, statements and placing them at right times well. You know her in and out my friend and you just let us be the deciders to understand her well, as I am guessing, You giving an explanation to her perspective will soon spin a wheel with chain of comments either agreeing or disagreeing and I understand that you do not want to delve into it at this point.
As for me I truly found peace with the character after reading the second part last few chapters again..few of them below gave me the much needed answers I was seeking at the end of this story.
“When I came to know Meera was your wife, I was like... it was shocking to me. And even more shocking was Meera’s behavior. The moment she knew you were with someone else, she went mad. I saw how much she was possessive of you. It was incomprehensible to me because she was already having sex with me and still, she couldn’t digest what you were doing. When I tried to reason my views on this, she screamed at me that if she has ever slept with me, that’s because her husband liked it.”
“And... that day I made a huge mistake. I couldn’t stop Sunny when he...when he took me to our bedroom. And I enjoyed it. I couldn’t stop him. I didn't have sex with him, but I would have. I had got myself prepared for it.”
“When you were making love to me, I often used to imagine it was him, Sunny, that I was having sex with. I didn't love him, not even for a moment, but thinking about having sex with him excited me. My stupid mind was filled with fantasies.”
“We shared, encouraged, and nurtured our fantasies, With Shekar I enjoyed sex with him. Though we both tried to behave and make believe it was just another accident, I secretly cherished the experience of lying under someone other than you. I knew it was foolish as well as dangerous and I tried my best to resist it.
Every time I made love to you since then, I fantasized and tried to imagine them - Sunny, Shekhar or Armaan - in you. I loved you always; I never stopped loving you. But my fantasies, they were like drugs to me. I couldn’t stop them. When I came to know you too had fantasies, I should have stopped you. But I didn't.
There stood my wife Meera. She was not perfect. She could make mistakes. She could have made the wrong choices. One of them was me. If she had married a normal man, she wouldn't have been encouraged to date another man. She wouldn't have been made to accidentally sleep with other men. She wouldn't have been made to question her own integrity.
I was the partner in anything and everything she found herself guilty of. I was the biggest choice she ever made. And I was destined to love not only her perfections but also her imperfections.
In short summary, both Krish and Meera are two sides of a same coin, she has her own fantasies and Krish has his cuckold fantasies, and they were perfectly made for each other with their fantasies, one of such fantasy triggered their life events which was started by Meera when she was with Sunny. Everything that happened after that, including Desai, is still part of those fantasies. The more I read previous part, the more I felt it applies here for part 3 as well…All the situations where Meera slept with others are her fantasies driven by the fantasies Krish harbored of her sleeping around. A firm “No” would have stopped this forever, but it never came because they both are alike.
Krish needs Meera for himself even though she sleeps around and that knowledge of her experience drives his desires for her and yes, he is a faulty piece and on other side Meera is also a faulty piece too, Meera wants Krish to say no for his and her fantasies and be possessive and she never got that so she felt the freedom to pursue her fantasies, Desai is one of those fantasy and a hard one which she couldn’t resist, If Krish can let go of his fantasies, Meera would have the strength to let go of her fantasies.
The couple are made for each other, Meera does not want to live in her fantasies, regrets it later and Krish does not want to put his love at risk, yet they are humans who give into their fantasies from time to time and they crawl back to each other at the end.
One has no strength to say no to his fantasies and Other has no purpose to not live her fantasies.
This is their fate, and they cannot escape it. A baby is merely a step and a significant one in their life ladder, but fantasies are just buried for the time being but not dead.
I hope you do not mess with this story ever again with another part!
~RCF