07-03-2025, 03:39 AM
(07-03-2025, 01:50 AM)Lollobionda Wrote: Thank you for the clarifying words, dear friend................
...................The profile I have described in my comments has been imprinted in my mind from the lines
and explanations I have read about Tahir so far.... and will try to communicate it in order to, among
other things, initiate a ‘healthy and constructive’ discussion that is good for the story.
I believe that such discussions are good for the story and keep it alive and exciting...
Good luck and much success
Lollobionda
you are right my friend, 100 percent... In the narrative, Tahir's personality is only revealed in relation to the current course and the story, and nothing else is possible or necessary for the story course, that was over 13 years ago and we only knew him for a few weeks, a few months at most... We should write it the way we saw and felt back then, how everything went on the surface, and we did it so...Meanwhile I saw other qualities, independent of this narrative and story about sex and the like...
He sacrificed his existence and even his life at least once for us, me and Meena... Which not even my brother would have done for me... It was about finding a document that had been lost and we, from here, from a foreign country, couldn't achieve anything... He personally drove overnight to a very far city in the country, 1200 kilometers away, dealt with government security officer, and system representatives, spent a lot of money and finally got out the document that was very important to us... and all that even though nobody, not me or Meena asked him and expected him to do it, he just heard that we had a problem,... To sacrifice time, energy, money and more important, putting himself in danger is something that even the people closest to you don't dare to approach... That could be Tahir and he did it, not for anything in return but only because, as he simply afterwards said, "that was not important... that's what friends are for..."... these were his words at the time and never mentioned it again...
Tha’s why I am a bit emotional and try to defend him… Apart from that, I appreciate your opinion regarding the current state and course of the story and honestly I find it very nice and I am proud, as I mentioned earlier, that the narration evokes emotions, that speaks for us, the authors, and it shows that we are not bad at what we do...
Liebe Grüße,
Salir