04-03-2025, 01:32 AM
(02-03-2025, 12:31 PM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: this is a beauty of your writing skills as you turned ourselves from Jaya to aashima.
Specially when she has a feeling of cheating her husband.
It's your story n you have right to write in your way. But being a genuine reader & appraiser of your writing, i just want to put what i like to read.
1. About Aashima reason is above.
2. Let her realise more her husband is not good for her.
3. But still a guilt of cheating since she was the looyal one ever.
4. Slowly she also degrades her husband.
Again it is a your story n i will read whatever you write.
Thanks Harbee
Thank you dear
Its Jaya's story, but Ashima have special place in this story...
Thanks, 3 some will be there.
in my POV, they are concerned about their social status..... They are in affair with those men secretly, but things are under control of them....
May be, not planned
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