03-03-2025, 02:36 AM
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Many Many Congratulations to Harry ! 
One of the great thing about this story is THE CHARACTERS . All the characters are so interesting and with having some background it makes really easy to understand their motive .
Every Character and their action and their motive can be understand .
Like for Example Sonarika . Sonarika cheating on her husband was not even surprising . Its feels natural that she is gonna cheat on her husband . Her Interaction with Meghna ( fucking bitch , I just hate her
Writer did great job in creating a character like her , its too good ) and Her explanation why did she married to Husband .
While I was reading the earlier chapters , Her interaction with Meghna , And the way Meghna just talking shit about Sonarika's husband , Sonarika was not even bothered , Instead of Shutting her up , She was defending her husband giving unnecessary explanation , How can you hear something so bad about the person who you claimed to be in love . Then I thought She is gonna cheat , Why ? Later in chapters She accepted that While husband loved her she made herself to fall in with her husband , Why she married ? because she always had some Husband Image in her mind , And her husband was best choice who fullfill her idea of Ideal Husband , that's it . There was no love . 10 years of marriage goes down the drain . Worst thing is That Vikram did not even do much , She just gave herself up because She never loved her husband ( and also explains the stereotype that women do anything for the man she loves ), She also thinks that she loves Vikram but no She still chasing the Silhouette . So i knew she is gonna cheat and she did . Meghna What a character , Its good , Its kind of rage baiting. I think she is better than Sonarika , Atleast she is honest about her opinion . Sonarika has no respect for her Husband , No fear of her husband, and hemant is partially responsible for this too , He just asleep for too long to see , He is predator and he suppressed his instinct . That is why i think Sonarika felt some king burden on her shoulders and and that is why she might be fed up with his attitude and also because He never was her Prince Charming . So You see her character was written or created in way that you dont feel shock but her cheating is well justify and its not bad thing may be this turn out good thing for her , I used to hate these thing but after reading her side of story it seems fine she cheated on her husband . This is thing i felt that Characters action can be understood with given back story and with well written dialogue .
But The thing that Surprised me is that She cheated too soon . I thought The First Part , There is gonna be 10 chapters so maybe in chapter 6 or 7 we gonna see this . In just 4 chapters it feels like that writer revealed everything but no there are 6 chapters left ,I cannot imagine if these 4 chapters contains so much content what those 6 chapters gonna have
.
And the side characters does not even feel side characters , at this point there is so many plots that the story can turn to any direction , Anyone at this point can become the Main character and at any given point we can explore the backstory or can focus on story of any character be it Kunal's Parinitha's or Shepherd or Sidharth's etc etc . I mean Harry can create the multiverse here
And also Kunal's character was also good . i like your take . Yes Kunal is cuckold and he should not get punished for it , He is successful businessman , Apart from his kink , He is a capable Human being not some losers like Every other Husband character in Indian Erotic forums. There was this story every thing was going great but suddenly writer decided to turn the husband Impotent , See if you cuck then its end for you, you deserve worst fate possible .
And now My Favorite HERO
HEMANT
Finally After so many Stories We Finally have a Husband Character who is not born cuck , Who is not pathetic loser , Who does not deserve the worst fate because you got married . Hemant Character feels so natural . Best Character Ever .
The creation of Hemant Character was so great , The backstory , The PTSD, His calm demeanor , His attitude, His dad body , and him not realizing his true potential , and His reluctance to let the real Hemant out . Everything is understandable because his backstory explained so well . This is perfect example of Natural Character .
Finally We have something so positive in Indian Erotic Forum . After reading Hemant part of the story , I dont even feel sad that his wife cheated on him , I was happy because He deserves much better than her and he will get someone so much better her . The thing is in Many stories there always be imbalance where wife character gets so praise but husband get downgraded so bad that there is no scope for Husband Character .
Here if Sonarika is 6 then Hemant is 10
. Finally some balance , both are equals .
I dont know what plans you have for Hemant , But for me The moment there i see some sign of Hemant's cuckoldness or Him forgiving her wife adultery , I will take my exit . Both of these things Hemant character is never gonna do .
Also I am bit worried because there are too many Villains and Hemant is kind of Alone , Its gonna be hard for Hemant . There is gonna be too much pressure on Hemant's character . Those thugs , Then this Shepherd's guy , Then Parintha's shaddy business ( Human trafficking ), Then I am afraid if his Mentor Roy ( if am not wrong ) gonna backstab him , Then this fucking basterd Vikram ( I wish hemant shows him What kind of beast he is , Like Collar pakad ke hawa me utha de
) and Then small time villains Meghna , I am against the any kind of violence but I need some female character to just punch her in the face ( Sorry ) . All of this too much for Hemant , Then his wife infidelity and then his son . To be Honest I always discourage the idea of including kids . Kids in the story makes harder for couple to split up .
And Now he is Transforming , The beast in Him , when wakes will tear and eat every one .
And also I wanna praise your creativity
to Include the bollywood in the story and its kind of logical too , He lives in mumbai and surrounded by high profile people and that Manish Malhotra's cameo made me chuckle , And your choice to include out of all bollywood heroines you choose Mrunal thakur just wow hahahahahah . This is incredible .
I am eagerly waiting and kind of scared If something gonna happen to Hemant . I just wanna see the Beast in him for once .
Man , the opening paragraph was too good , It can used for Movies . I really wanna know what happened back there .
I have so many thoughts but at this point I cannot articulate all of them , Will make another post.
Again , Hats off to Harry , I mean what i can add more in your praise . Kudos to you .
And again *Calender Update do* *Calender Update do* *Calender Update do* *Calender Update do* . lol
( Take your time , And if possible can you please post Update on weekends )
One of the great thing about this story is THE CHARACTERS . All the characters are so interesting and with having some background it makes really easy to understand their motive .
Every Character and their action and their motive can be understand .
Like for Example Sonarika . Sonarika cheating on her husband was not even surprising . Its feels natural that she is gonna cheat on her husband . Her Interaction with Meghna ( fucking bitch , I just hate her
Writer did great job in creating a character like her , its too good ) and Her explanation why did she married to Husband . While I was reading the earlier chapters , Her interaction with Meghna , And the way Meghna just talking shit about Sonarika's husband , Sonarika was not even bothered , Instead of Shutting her up , She was defending her husband giving unnecessary explanation , How can you hear something so bad about the person who you claimed to be in love . Then I thought She is gonna cheat , Why ? Later in chapters She accepted that While husband loved her she made herself to fall in with her husband , Why she married ? because she always had some Husband Image in her mind , And her husband was best choice who fullfill her idea of Ideal Husband , that's it . There was no love . 10 years of marriage goes down the drain . Worst thing is That Vikram did not even do much , She just gave herself up because She never loved her husband ( and also explains the stereotype that women do anything for the man she loves
), She also thinks that she loves Vikram but no She still chasing the Silhouette . So i knew she is gonna cheat and she did . Meghna What a character , Its good , Its kind of rage baiting. I think she is better than Sonarika , Atleast she is honest about her opinion . Sonarika has no respect for her Husband , No fear of her husband, and hemant is partially responsible for this too , He just asleep for too long to see , He is predator and he suppressed his instinct . That is why i think Sonarika felt some king burden on her shoulders and and that is why she might be fed up with his attitude and also because He never was her Prince Charming . So You see her character was written or created in way that you dont feel shock but her cheating is well justify and its not bad thing may be this turn out good thing for her , I used to hate these thing but after reading her side of story it seems fine she cheated on her husband . This is thing i felt that Characters action can be understood with given back story and with well written dialogue .But The thing that Surprised me is that She cheated too soon . I thought The First Part , There is gonna be 10 chapters so maybe in chapter 6 or 7 we gonna see this . In just 4 chapters it feels like that writer revealed everything but no there are 6 chapters left ,I cannot imagine if these 4 chapters contains so much content what those 6 chapters gonna have
.And the side characters does not even feel side characters , at this point there is so many plots that the story can turn to any direction , Anyone at this point can become the Main character and at any given point we can explore the backstory or can focus on story of any character be it Kunal's Parinitha's or Shepherd or Sidharth's etc etc . I mean Harry can create the multiverse here
And also Kunal's character was also good . i like your take . Yes Kunal is cuckold and he should not get punished for it , He is successful businessman , Apart from his kink , He is a capable Human being not some losers like Every other Husband character in Indian Erotic forums. There was this story every thing was going great but suddenly writer decided to turn the husband Impotent , See if you cuck then its end for you, you deserve worst fate possible .
And now My Favorite HERO
HEMANT
Finally After so many Stories We Finally have a Husband Character who is not born cuck , Who is not pathetic loser , Who does not deserve the worst fate because you got married . Hemant Character feels so natural . Best Character Ever .
The creation of Hemant Character was so great , The backstory , The PTSD, His calm demeanor , His attitude, His dad body , and him not realizing his true potential , and His reluctance to let the real Hemant out . Everything is understandable because his backstory explained so well . This is perfect example of Natural Character .
Finally We have something so positive in Indian Erotic Forum . After reading Hemant part of the story , I dont even feel sad that his wife cheated on him , I was happy because He deserves much better than her and he will get someone so much better her . The thing is in Many stories there always be imbalance where wife character gets so praise but husband get downgraded so bad that there is no scope for Husband Character .
Here if Sonarika is 6 then Hemant is 10
. Finally some balance , both are equals . I dont know what plans you have for Hemant , But for me The moment there i see some sign of Hemant's cuckoldness or Him forgiving her wife adultery , I will take my exit . Both of these things Hemant character is never gonna do .
Also I am bit worried because there are too many Villains and Hemant is kind of Alone , Its gonna be hard for Hemant . There is gonna be too much pressure on Hemant's character . Those thugs , Then this Shepherd's guy , Then Parintha's shaddy business ( Human trafficking ), Then I am afraid if his Mentor Roy ( if am not wrong ) gonna backstab him , Then this fucking basterd Vikram ( I wish hemant shows him What kind of beast he is , Like Collar pakad ke hawa me utha de
) and Then small time villains Meghna , I am against the any kind of violence but I need some female character to just punch her in the face ( Sorry ) . All of this too much for Hemant , Then his wife infidelity and then his son . To be Honest I always discourage the idea of including kids . Kids in the story makes harder for couple to split up . And Now he is Transforming , The beast in Him , when wakes will tear and eat every one .
And also I wanna praise your creativity
to Include the bollywood in the story and its kind of logical too , He lives in mumbai and surrounded by high profile people and that Manish Malhotra's cameo made me chuckle , And your choice to include out of all bollywood heroines you choose Mrunal thakur just wow hahahahahah . This is incredible . I am eagerly waiting and kind of scared If something gonna happen to Hemant . I just wanna see the Beast in him for once .
Man , the opening paragraph was too good , It can used for Movies . I really wanna know what happened back there .
I have so many thoughts but at this point I cannot articulate all of them , Will make another post.
Again , Hats off to Harry , I mean what i can add more in your praise . Kudos to you .
And again *Calender Update do* *Calender Update do* *Calender Update do* *Calender Update do* . lol
( Take your time , And if possible can you please post Update on weekends )
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