02-03-2025, 02:42 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-03-2025, 03:11 PM by DeanWinchester00007. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Ah Man , what is this ? Who wrote this ? Is it the same Harry ?
I remember , while ago we were talking about ending of this specific story and Harry said that he was thinking to re write the ending of that story just for our satisfaction , and then few days later , He said He was thinking to write his own story . I thought that since its gonna be his first story , It would be short one , or something like any other stories , But Boy this , I never expected this . I read the opening of the story few weeks ago , and I stopped reading further , I saved this story for later . Now that i have completed it .
Man ,I Have to say this what a story , I just could not express it in words , How fresh it felt after reading so many stories filled with the same plot again again again , Finally we have something Fresh and Unique . The whole concept , Characters, Suspense , Thriller and So many Plot in just one story that's very commendable .
You created an Intricate Plot , So many characters , and many plots yet there is no confusing. The pacing is great and while reading the story everything is clear , I mean that there is no confusing , The story is well thought out and written in a way that it does not create any confusion and there is no plot holes also .
As someone who claimed that this is his first Attempt , You, Sir Harry is big Liar .
If this is your first attempt , and this is your first story then I am thinking what's your 3rd or 5th story gonna looks like.
I dont think there is hardly any member in XOSSIPY who does not know you . Harry is well known who his detailed analysis of the stories and For his comments . His comments always gives fresh perspective about the stories , and they always varies too . He has great knowledge of pop culture too. Often his comments Filled with references from Literature to Movies which also helps others reader to read about those books or movies . Sometimes his comments are better than stories and Also longer than some stories
but Its always fun to read his comments after every update .
Many Writers create only One plot in the story , But here you have created so many plots and they are all connected with each other .
Will write more about story , Later . I wanna re read some parts
Harry . Kudos to you . Its so interesting and exciting .
The only Criticism i have is *UPDATE* *UPDATE* *UPDATE* ( Mujhe Update do Mujhe Update do Mujhe Update do )
I remember , while ago we were talking about ending of this specific story and Harry said that he was thinking to re write the ending of that story just for our satisfaction , and then few days later , He said He was thinking to write his own story . I thought that since its gonna be his first story , It would be short one , or something like any other stories , But Boy this , I never expected this . I read the opening of the story few weeks ago , and I stopped reading further , I saved this story for later . Now that i have completed it .
Man ,I Have to say this what a story , I just could not express it in words , How fresh it felt after reading so many stories filled with the same plot again again again , Finally we have something Fresh and Unique . The whole concept , Characters, Suspense , Thriller and So many Plot in just one story that's very commendable .
You created an Intricate Plot , So many characters , and many plots yet there is no confusing. The pacing is great and while reading the story everything is clear , I mean that there is no confusing , The story is well thought out and written in a way that it does not create any confusion and there is no plot holes also .
As someone who claimed that this is his first Attempt , You, Sir Harry is big Liar .
If this is your first attempt , and this is your first story then I am thinking what's your 3rd or 5th story gonna looks like.I dont think there is hardly any member in XOSSIPY who does not know you . Harry is well known who his detailed analysis of the stories and For his comments . His comments always gives fresh perspective about the stories , and they always varies too . He has great knowledge of pop culture too. Often his comments Filled with references from Literature to Movies which also helps others reader to read about those books or movies . Sometimes his comments are better than stories and Also longer than some stories
but Its always fun to read his comments after every update .
Many Writers create only One plot in the story , But here you have created so many plots and they are all connected with each other .
Will write more about story , Later . I wanna re read some parts
Harry . Kudos to you . Its so interesting and exciting . The only Criticism i have is *UPDATE* *UPDATE* *UPDATE* ( Mujhe Update do Mujhe Update do Mujhe Update do )
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