Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness
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OMG, Bro!! It finally happened!!! Vikram succeeded in seducing Sonarika and she ended up cheating Hemant.

Very well written and seriously i enjoyed every bit of it.

I'm loving this series thoroughly--can't wait to see how Sonarika  relationship with her husband (Hemant)changes and grows!!

Hey Harry Bro!! I just don't have enough words to describe how much I've loved your writing.

More than anything, I think I appreciate the consistency of Hemant's character, how you've drawn us through his struggle between past and present, longing and fear.I think there's a lot to be said for maintaining the integrity of the narrative as you have.

For me, the one thing which makes this series stand head and shoulders above most writing on xossipy has  been, the rebuilding husband's (Hemant)  character for future intensifying drama!!

This is surely going to be  a great series with many twists and turns! Honestly I'm not sure where I want this story to go...but one thing I'm sure that this story of yours will change the perspectives of most the readers who thinks that husband's are losers or wimp and can't compete with lover's of cheating wife.

I think this would be a start of audiences who would really appreciate husband to be strong - mentally and physically

I would love hemant to remain loyal--atleast till he founds out the truth of cheating wife,so that he have high moral grounds when he takes a perfect revenge/or make her suffer with same pain of cheating before reclaiming Sonarika back

However the sex scene between (Vikram and Sonarika ) intense weren't over the top as too many stories are lately. I'll look forward to the further adventures of Sonarika and Vikram where ever life takes them!

Your writing is Undoubtedly superb and knowing that some of it is from your reading experiences is even more fascinating.

You definitely are perfect skillful Author(as all the criteria's to be good author are naturally presented in your creative brain) and not just a simple writer.

Thanks again harry  for marvellous writing.

Will be eagerly waiting for your next update?❤️
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RE: Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness - by Rocky@handsome - 27-02-2025, 02:16 PM



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