Adultery The New Girl (Completed)

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Dear Readers,
I do not see much likes or comments on this thread. Hence I am seriously having second thoughts about continuing this story since it has approximately 30+ chapters and I do not want to waste my and everyone else's time...

If you think otherwise or want me to continue this story then let me know in the comments here...

I also know that I need to improve my writing skills and I am working on that to make things more juicier and entertaining to read. 

Preeti

Hey Preeti
Who in the hell told you that the story is not good..... Its excellent story.... your gaining viewers dear.... Just dont wait for likes.... read the comments too.... And your not wasting anyones time here (not yours not readers) everyone here is on their free will to visit and read.... 

Just wanted to tell you that sex scenes what you write are good but make it excellent by adding the ooohhhh and aaahhh's.... Yesssss like that..... fucccckkkkk meeeee..... harrrddddeerrrrr..... these all words will make the encounter more erotic and excellent to read and imagine...... it will enhace the scene and the plot you create in the story is awesome.... otherwise it looks like a fast paced sex story.....

Please dont mind my straight forward comment.... You're the author you know your story best.... But i would suggest you add up those changes in the future episodes and see the difference....