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Avani's Journey to the North
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(25-02-2025, 07:48 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Bhai Story achi.... Soch bhi achi hai.... Lekin mujhe kuch points achhe nahi Lage..... Jaise.... Kaunsi married wife kisi ko bhi apna pati maan le jo bas abhi abhi milen ho..... Kaunsi lady apni panty utarvayegi aur chadvayegi ek anjaan insaan se fir woh married lady ho ya fir koi randi hi kyu na ho aesa nahi karegi..... Kaunsi lady apni gand par haath padhte us insaan ko thappad nahi maregi.... Chup chap apne gaand dabvayegi.....
Aap apni story continue rakho dekhte hai kahan se kahan leke jaate ho story ko aap.....
P.S. agar aap apne story ke previous update mein koi changes karte ho toh us changes ko alag font ke color mein likhna taake readers ko puri story fir se na padhne pade..... Thanks

Same happened with Anita jab bus ride mein ek anjaan usko apne Lund ki maalish krne ko kehta hai aur Anita bina offend huye uske Lund mein tel lagati hai...toh bhai these are fantasy stories jinme hum thoda mirch masala dhundte hn aur maine situation bhi batai hai wrna xossip aur kaafi websites pey sidhe ek din mein sex ho jata hai

We've read so many stories jisme directly sex scenes par aa jate hn usse thoda hatke likhna is not bad but aapka review mujhe achha laga 

Should I continue or not ??
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Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 19-02-2025, 11:47 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 20-02-2025, 12:22 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Rizzi1198 - 22-02-2025, 09:40 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 22-02-2025, 11:07 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Aman34 - 22-02-2025, 11:21 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Aman34 - 22-02-2025, 11:28 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Aman34 - 23-02-2025, 12:52 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Aman34 - 23-02-2025, 12:53 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 23-02-2025, 07:52 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 23-02-2025, 09:03 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Aman34 - 23-02-2025, 11:28 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 24-02-2025, 10:15 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 24-02-2025, 02:02 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by sexypreeti - 24-02-2025, 02:26 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Aman34 - 24-02-2025, 04:31 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Aman34 - 24-02-2025, 11:49 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Ramva - 25-02-2025, 12:23 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Aman34 - 25-02-2025, 02:14 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 25-02-2025, 11:02 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 25-02-2025, 11:03 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 16-03-2025, 07:05 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Aman34 - 25-02-2025, 03:58 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Aman34 - 28-02-2025, 11:56 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 16-03-2025, 07:07 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by joy2008 - 12-03-2025, 03:10 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 16-03-2025, 10:23 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 16-03-2025, 10:16 AM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by Spnize - 23-03-2025, 05:28 PM
RE: Avani's Journey to the North - by sexypreeti - 23-03-2025, 09:34 PM



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