Adultery The Facilitator

[Harry Jordan]

Last Update felt too short. Please Provide big update or end chapters with cliffhanger . 

I think you are seeing this in the wrong way. Kunal's detective arc is not at all unnecessary but acutally important for his character to evolve. Unlike the other characters , Kunal is the one who actually sees Priya's manipulation and is actinge against it now. In many words he is the ace in the game. And this is no longer the detectice arc. Kunal is going to play the same game Priya has been playing on their lives. In his search for truth he is going to get close to Priya. This is the beginning of his transformation , whatever he finds or whatever the truth is , this will change Kunal for better or for worse. The only difference is  Esha lost her family in Priya's manipulation. Kunal alteast has the drive to protect his son , this will result in making an anchor to his mind where no matter what happens , he will eventually return to his son and will still protect him. Remember this is not just his drive to find the truth , what Kunal is trying to do is find justification behind all of this and eventually find someone or something that can be held responsible for all of this. By doing this , he can close that part of his life in whole and find closure with Esha and her cheating. Be it Priya or be it Esha , he can finally have someone who he can blame and see the person responsible for all the wrong things in his life. This will draw him to change his perspective in life and eventually find peace and love in the future. He won't have to hold on to Esha or Priya to keep blaming on. He can finally move on , a relief from all his pains. A fresh start to his sanity and a bright future.



Now in Priya's case , there are two things that can happen. The first thing is justification for her actions , when Kunal finds out why she does this manipulations and mind games or what is the source of her mindset is , Kunal might actually accept why she does this and either end quest against her and move on or possibly form a romance seeing a different side of Priya. This is just my personal preference to have both characters eventually find each other appreciative and form a life transforming their mindsets and form a bond. The second thing is finding Priya's manipulation to get much worse , remember her game is not yet done. She just wanted Kunal away from Esha's life , she still wants to control Esha's life and mayve she is planning to ruin her life further. Maybe a more psychotice side of Priya will come in the future where she will either target Aniket or much worse Aditya just to control and fiddle with Esha's life. But then Priya's mind in itself is a huge puzzle , a part of her wants to take revenge on Esha , another wants to protect her long lost friend. This confliction is also interrupting her game with Esha's life. Her game alone is a complex cascade of emotions , one point she wants to see Esha suffer , another point she wants to comfort her. Like a violent storm in the sea , Priya's choices are as unpredictable as waves , there is no idea what she will do next. Maybe Kunal's search to her or his counter game against her will draw out a resolve in Priya that will make her do the ultimate decision in what to do with Esha's life. In my opinion , the most interesting part of the story to me is finding what Priya truly wants , and I am quiet happy that Kunal will be the one who finds it because on a storyline standpoint he is the right character to find this truth.



At the beginning , she was the innocent victim in the story but the more and more each chapter comes , I am pretty much convinced Esha is the inevitable Villain in this story. She tries to justify her actions for seeking her affair , but at the end of the day , she is a cheater. She refused to give divorce to Kunal for some reason. She claims there is a part of her that still loves Kunal and regrets she met Aniket but at the same time , she haven't shown one ounce of remorse or guilt for cheating Kunal. Even during her big affair phase , her concern was only for Aditya , not once in those stints did she ever think for once about Kunal. Which is why , as a personal grudge and on a storyline standpoint ,I expect the worse ending for Esha. One of the reader here pointed out there is some similarities between Esha and the famous novel about Anna Karenina. And it is true , her actions in the novel is somewhat similar to what Esha has done , and in the novel as well , Anna eventually suffers a terrible fate because of it. My expectation with her arc is to let her live a life of consequences. She already is at this point. She will soon be divorced in the grounds of adultery , her father should die hearing the news making her see the magnitude of her mistakes , at the end of the day all she will have left in her life will be Aniket and this new child , she will never get Aditya as her whole son as Kunal will be raising him as well. My initial headcannon of the epilogue having an older Aditya leaving Esha for good to live the rest of his life with Kunal still stands. That is something I will find quiet wonderful with the ending of this story. In short I don't see or want a happy ending for Esha. Hell if she suffers the same Anna Karenina fate , I will be quiet satisfied.


And there is the idea of a Kunal and Esha reunion , that is pretty much impossible until some really drastic and terrible things happen to these characters. Like Priya under desperation starts to target Aditya putting his life in danger , Esha suffering a miscarriage loosing Aniket's child. Aniket dying or secretly cheating on Esha during her pregnancy phase. Or a secret alliance between Aniket and Priya to ruin Esha's life. There are many ways that can happen , but I honestly somewhat wants it and at the same time don't. Unless there is some drastic things happen in the story , I don't want an Esha and Kunal reunion , and if there is ever a chance , then I would like Aditya to be the key to that reunion and the characters of Kunal and Esha to change in many ways when they reunite signifying the magnitude of Priya's game which has resulted in both of their lives to go through a storm and change their approached and mindsets about life.


That is all I will say about this story for now , I have my own story to complete and it has been quiet time consuming in that regard. However , all the best to clearlover and hope the best for future. This is most likely the last time I will discuss about this story because I intend to focus on my story for now. I wish well for the author and let him take his time as much as he desires to complete this story and I will definitely be reading the upcoming chapters and the eventual conclusion.

Wishing you all a great day and week.

  HARRY JORDAN