Adultery The Facilitator

[Harry Jordan]

Lol better, better and better...so obsessed in making Kunal better? Better for what? One one end you call Esha slut, bitch for opening her legs for some one so she is a cheater..other end you are validating her cheating by saying Kunal needs to get better, Either she is a cheater and Kunal has no problems or her cheating is valid and Kunal is a pussy and needs to get better. Choose one. 

There is nothing wrong with Kunal and there is no need for any one to get better. Stop thinking that only a woman can make a man better. You are contradicting your points left and right. Kunal is fine as he is and need not require someone like Priya to make him better. Just because Esha felt her marriage stale doesn't mean Kunal has some problems sexually. After 10 yrs of marriage who knows Aniket will not even fuck her once a month.

Monotony becomes a problem in every marriage after a while and couple talk and resolve it by thinking to make it better. Bitches like Esha doesn't value talk and rather seek pleasure outside. Author gave us one chapter of bullshit from Aniket with poems, letters and his desperation to make us believe he is genuine lover and care for Esha and a lady like Esha who constantly looks at her family photo for making her day bright and talks about balancing work and family seems to fall for child's play feminism bullshit from Priya. 
Problem is there is no depth in love story weaved here between Esha and Aniket, esp when you write Kunal and Esha were lovers from college days. Compare to that this one stales. Hence people think its all about dick power but the plot is weak esp when once she is caught , despite regret her going back to Aniket doesn't have much depth in it. If not for so much well written vocabulary and nice crisp writing , this story has such a weak plot and unrealistic loopholes.

Only interesting point left is why Priya choose to be a mediator for Kunal and Esha. One reason is obv that she wants Esha to have Aditya and not lose him but there is also another motive related to Kunal. I do not think she is planning to marry him or make him hers as she already shown him she is not one man woman.

~RCF

Lol I get your point , and I am just tip toeing with ideas on how this story can develop. I mean I have already told you Love is a joke in this story. Sure the relation between Esha and Aniket is definitely unrealistic , I simply shut my brain when Kunal of all perople actually asked to watch Esha and Aniket , from that point in my eyes , realism has gone out the window LOL. I mean for a woman like Esha who seems to have doubts regarding Priya but still seeks her help in everything is in itself a huge contradiction. Forget Kunal , Esha's mindset is the worst here.

Which is why I insinuate to have Esha suffer the worst ending in the story beacuse I don't honestly care where and how her character goes unless she starts suffering some really serious consequences. Even until now to this point of the story , we don't see the consequences of her actions but rather her happy times with Aniket. Even when everything is going down , she is opening her mouth so that Aniket can stuff his cock in her throat. She is happily talking about her pregnancy not worrying about anything. I mean clear as day Esha is more bad of a person than Priya is at this point. To be frank Priya with her actions actually saved Kunal from a terrible woman as a wife. 

And yes , I also believe there is some bigger connection between Priya and Esha than just a PHD project being ruined. To some extent I can understand Priya's annoyance with Kunal because in her eyes , Kunal is the one who took Esha the best friend of Priya from her. That could explain why she wanted to ruin the marriage because she wanted to destroy their love and she did it though pretty unrealistically. 

To some extent I can understand the characters decisions while at the same time I do find it quiet ridiculous. But the writing is pretty top notch , the chapters aren't lengthy but in few words a lot of plot is told. But still there is a lot of empty spaces in the story.

To me its like the movie MARCO a movie I found one big critique about , in the end of the movie when his family is slaughtered. Marco takes revenge , by giving some gruesome deaths to the villains , but one of the villain who did the most tortorous acts , gets killed in an instant by a head chop. To me that is something I never liked about plot ideas , when you are showing such severe brutality to innocent characters , there must be a pay off worthy of it. But the Villain gets the easy exit. So in my opinion , PAYOFF matters. When you inflict so much pain and punishment on others , it must come bite you back. Here in this story , Priya has indeed done some terrible things to Kunal and Esha ,and at the end I do want her to get what she deserves for all the acts unless the justification for her acts have weight or relatable motivations. The same way , I DO want Esha to suffer the consequences for her actions , for now there is some , but that isn't enough. Her punishment should be in the same magnitude of her sins. And the same way , even though I like the character , Kunal too deserves his karma. This game he is going to play , it will change him and there might be consequences. This has to transform him , for better or for worse. The only innocent soul I can see in this story is Aditya. So I believe Aditya could become Kunal's drive to never falter too much and find a way back to his son. Be committed to be his father and the responsible parent. 

That is my only desire from this story , at the end of the day , the story should have a desirable pay off to its characters. Or else it will loose its traction and meaning.