22-02-2025, 05:55 PM
(22-02-2025, 01:54 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: Honestly this can work even without the miscarriage part. In my opinion, I imagine a sequence where Esha accidentally comes home dropping Aditya and sees Kunal taking care of Priya during her pregnancy days showing the reformation in him , like he is helping her during the worst period pain time by calming her or singing to her or something. Something Kunal didn't do during his time with Esha. Showing that Priya had influenced Kunal to become better.
Its like I said in a previous comment , Priya molds the Coal that is Kunal and turns it into Gold , while Esha abandoned that coal and picked another already polished Gold.
Lol better, better and better...so obsessed in making Kunal better? Better for what? One one end you call Esha slut, bitch for opening her legs for some one so she is a cheater..other end you are validating her cheating by saying Kunal needs to get better, Either she is a cheater and Kunal has no problems or her cheating is valid and Kunal is a pussy and needs to get better. Choose one.
There is nothing wrong with Kunal and there is no need for any one to get better. Stop thinking that only a woman can make a man better. You are contradicting your points left and right. Kunal is fine as he is and need not require someone like Priya to make him better. Just because Esha felt her marriage stale doesn't mean Kunal has some problems sexually. After 10 yrs of marriage who knows Aniket will not even fuck her once a month.
Monotony becomes a problem in every marriage after a while and couple talk and resolve it by thinking to make it better. Bitches like Esha doesn't value talk and rather seek pleasure outside. Author gave us one chapter of bullshit from Aniket with poems, letters and his desperation to make us believe he is genuine lover and care for Esha and a lady like Esha who constantly looks at her family photo for making her day bright and talks about balancing work and family seems to fall for child's play feminism bullshit from Priya.
Problem is there is no depth in love story weaved here between Esha and Aniket, esp when you write Kunal and Esha were lovers from college days. Compare to that this one stales. Hence people think its all about dick power but the plot is weak esp when once she is caught , despite regret her going back to Aniket doesn't have much depth in it. If not for so much well written vocabulary and nice crisp writing , this story has such a weak plot and unrealistic loopholes.
Only interesting point left is why Priya choose to be a mediator for Kunal and Esha. One reason is obv that she wants Esha to have Aditya and not lose him but there is also another motive related to Kunal. I do not think she is planning to marry him or make him hers as she already shown him she is not one man woman.
~RCF