Misc. Erotica Maheen ........ Mohy Rang Dy Piya

[Kamukta]

Pink brother all is going ok ok but apake story me jo line cross hoti thi main character ke through and ussme jo seduction hota tha yanha wo chij missing hai bhai and 2nd most important thing that you are taking too much time to buildup the character I mean it's been more than 30 pages and still actress has no any bound to fuck.
It's just my thought brother coz mai aapki story ko achhe se jaanta hun. 
Iss story me abhi tak koi bhi wow moment nahi aaya boss.
Sorry if u feel bad bro but it's my personal thought once again I am saying this brother.