Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

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I may not be in total agreement if they could be written in a better way, the way I think of this is because we are reading them in parts like one update at a time we expect more action in each of the parts, but if we were to read this as a story, as a whole each and every update seems to be perfectly aligned with the other and even though the progress seem slower holistically it feels more complete, for instance the last update had Hariya and Anita talk about the details of having sex in front of others in public. The eroticism of these details really peaked my interest and I was imagining the events as if they were real or may be even something that we can forsee happening in the future as well. Either ways though ur the owner of this masterpiece so I will just follow your lead. Cant wait for hotter updates, but please do bring Ramu along as well.

Hey there Teebone,
Agreed to your comment but please don't feel bad of what I'm going to reply here....
You might be right but not totally or fully.... You see if you print the update and put it up like a book and you start reading it from the start or say 3 updates from the behind the current one... You will find it repetitive.... Which is prolonging the story and the plot.... Hariya and Anita recollecting their memories from where they met and how they got attracted and the erotic scenario created is excellent..... But thinking logically..... Which woman would like to get fucked in public ???? That too looking into the eyes of the on-lookers ??? I don't think even the highest paid prostitute will do that.... Anyways my POV is that the last update prolonged it.... Rather if the conversation would jump to ice cream licking and sucking after the recollection of cock showing by Hariya..... He can praise Anita by saying he loved to look at the way she sucked into the ice cream... And he will love to look at her again sick his cock like that ice cream or she tells Hariya that she's getting late to go home and we end the chapter here and continue the erotic get together in the new chapter/update...... Maybe then the plot and the story will move ahead... Rather than getting into repeated scenarios.