Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[Teebone1985]

Thanks for the feedback. I welcome this constructive criticism and agree that the past few updates could have been written in a better way to move the story ahead. Will try to move the story forward now.

I may not be in total agreement if they could be written in a better way, the way I think of this is because we are reading them in parts like one update at a time we expect more action in each of the parts, but if we were to read this as a story, as a whole each and every update seems to be perfectly aligned with the other and even though the progress seem slower holistically it feels more complete, for instance the last update had Hariya and Anita talk about the details of having sex in front of others in public. The eroticism of these details really peaked my interest and I was imagining the events as if they were real or may be even something that we can forsee happening in the future as well. Either ways though ur the owner of this masterpiece so I will just follow your lead. Cant wait for hotter updates, but please do bring Ramu along as well.