18-02-2025, 09:12 AM
Two Word Review for Part U : ABSOLUTELY SPECTACULAR
The idea that Kunal wants to form a romantic relationship with Priya opens a doorway to interesting scenarios to explore the dynamics of these characters. I would like to share certain dynamics that can really make this story captivating.
Kunal's Search For Truth : Part T and Part U did a remarkable job in exploring Kunal's character and the improvement and evolution it is going through. As Part T focused on his rage and anger , Part U showed the meticulous and attentive side of him , this break up has started to transform him in ways that he himself is unaware of. For a man who was once a simple hardworking employee is now a part time detective and he is doing it very carefully considering one wrong move could ruin his plans to find out the truth. Its pretty clear the surroundings and change in his life is transforming his mentality and now the added risk of getting close to Esha would definitely evolve him further. Plus I am happy that the author dedicated an entire chapter to Kunal and Kunal's perspective alone. Because I honestly believe that is the best way to go. Conventional wisdom does say he should be the Victor of the story and he should finally be the man walking out of all this the winner. And I believe that can be achieved if his evolution keeps on developing.
Possible Romance Between Kunal and Priya : This is definitely I would love to see , because both the characters can have the potential to really converge in ways they cannot imagine. Kunal is approaching this relationship to find out more about Priya and just imagine what if Kunal actually symphatizes with Priya and see the error in Esha's actions. What if Kunal with his influence thanks to his job in USA decides to give Priya a second chance in her lost PHD. And that makes Priya to like Kunal's character and starts to fall in love with him. What if Priya understands the shortcomings Kunal has in bed and used her knowledge to give him a better lifestyle choice and fitness routine which eventually leads to Kunal having physical changes and better in bed. What if Kunal and Priya eventually forge a bigger emotional and physical connection that is much more bigger than Kunal and Esha had. This will be a really cool dynamic that can add a certain thrill to the story. Many of this cheating stories have the wife and her new lover's relationship explored. I say lets take a unique approach , lets explore the husband and the woman who ruined his marriage relationship that can be explored. Because there is a cascade of emotions that can help carve out interesting situations and bonds never seen before.
Transformation of Priya's Character : Priya is definitely the title character , she has been and have been pretty much been the "Facilitator" in this story. But imagine if she genuinely starts to fall in love with Kunal in future developments. I would like to iterate some of the points from the earlier scenario and have Kunal actually understand Priya's reasoning for her actions and Priya realizes that Kunal was always a good man and Esha is a fool to let a man like him slip away from her grasp easily. Let Priya understand Kunal as a person up close and eventually have her slowly fall in love to his comfort and his dedication. This can be diluted in two ways where Kunal can be genuine with his side and they can become a happy couple or Kunal can be sinister and he will eventually make Priya experience a heartbreak. Either way a possible romance with Kunal could add more dynamic to Priya's character and the nature of their relationship can help evolve their characters further. More importantly I would love to see Priya evolve from her character as a manipulator and control freak to a loving woman who understands her mistakes and eventually dreams of a new life with Kunal.
Jealousy of Esha : THIS is definitely the part I will be looking forward to. Despite of her decisions , Esha still claims she "feels" for Kunal. I wonder what would be her reaction when she sees Kunal forming a relationship with not just another woman , but the very woman who was a mastermind in ruining her marriage. Will we finally see a more hypocritical side of Esha in the future with her witnessing Kunal and Priya getting close. A rather interesting part I would love to see is if Priya convinces Kunal to improve in his fitness and eventually Kunal transforms into what Priya desires and one day Esha witnesses Kunal and Priya in their time of intimacy at her place. It will be Esha's turn to be kicked to the corner. This will add much more dynamic to Esha's stance in her life right now. She claims she still "loves" Kunal but her thought process is completely engaged in Aniket and this pregnancy. I would like to point out the following sequence from part U to prove my point.
"I felt it, Aniket, the baby kicked!" Esha whispered, her voice quick with joy. "The first sign, it's amazing, right?"
Kunal's jaw tightened, the mention of Aniket and the baby a fresh wound. He tried to remain unseen, but Esha was too engrossed in her conversation to notice him.
"I have to be quick. I'll drop Aditya with Kunal, then see you at the clinic," she continued, her words tumbling out. "We'll see the baby's development on the ultrasound, I can't wait!"
Those words were like daggers, piercing Kunal's resolve. Here he was, trapped in this metal box, witnessing a new life forming without him, a life he had once imagined with Esha. The jealousy was a sharp, burning pain, not just for what he'd lost, but for what was being created in his absence.
Now this part of the chapter only adds fuel to Kunal's position in the current scenario and I don't want this to be used as a direct tit for tat approach. But Esha is happy with this pregnancy and her relation with Aniket at this point , and she is still finding happiness despite the hurt she had inflicted on Kunal. What is more curious about this factor is that Esha is happily talking about her unborn baby to Aniket expressing her happiness while at the same time a few minutes later she states to Kunal that this pregnancy is a mistake. She is finding reasoning for her cheating and trying to find justifications for her actions. Which is why I would definitely love Priya and Kunal to form a romantic relationship and their bond should grow right in front of Esha's eyes and either that will make her mind clear on what she wants , either she will completely forget Kunal and move with Aniket for good. Or she will get that pull , that familiar twinge she always had for Kunal and make her see her errors and try to find any hope for a reunion with him in the future. Its a fucked up situation , but I still believe Esha and Kunal can get a happy ending together if the story takes an interesting path.
That being said , once again I applaud the Author for another remarkable Part. Your handling of character dynamics is much appreciated and the way the story is developing , I am definitely looking forward to it. On a side note , I have used a "Kunal" character in my own story which I will admit is loosely inspired from here. However , the characters are completely different including origins as my vision for the character is something unique and I've been writing him as a thesis on my case studies and research regarding sexual relationships and sex life. I feel honored that you are also one of the writers that inspired me to start my stinct in story telling and now I understand the hardships you must be taking to complete each chapter. Anyways , All The Best for upcoming parts and wish you well for the future with more interesting stories like this.
With Love.
HARRY JORDAN
The idea that Kunal wants to form a romantic relationship with Priya opens a doorway to interesting scenarios to explore the dynamics of these characters. I would like to share certain dynamics that can really make this story captivating.
Kunal's Search For Truth : Part T and Part U did a remarkable job in exploring Kunal's character and the improvement and evolution it is going through. As Part T focused on his rage and anger , Part U showed the meticulous and attentive side of him , this break up has started to transform him in ways that he himself is unaware of. For a man who was once a simple hardworking employee is now a part time detective and he is doing it very carefully considering one wrong move could ruin his plans to find out the truth. Its pretty clear the surroundings and change in his life is transforming his mentality and now the added risk of getting close to Esha would definitely evolve him further. Plus I am happy that the author dedicated an entire chapter to Kunal and Kunal's perspective alone. Because I honestly believe that is the best way to go. Conventional wisdom does say he should be the Victor of the story and he should finally be the man walking out of all this the winner. And I believe that can be achieved if his evolution keeps on developing.
Possible Romance Between Kunal and Priya : This is definitely I would love to see , because both the characters can have the potential to really converge in ways they cannot imagine. Kunal is approaching this relationship to find out more about Priya and just imagine what if Kunal actually symphatizes with Priya and see the error in Esha's actions. What if Kunal with his influence thanks to his job in USA decides to give Priya a second chance in her lost PHD. And that makes Priya to like Kunal's character and starts to fall in love with him. What if Priya understands the shortcomings Kunal has in bed and used her knowledge to give him a better lifestyle choice and fitness routine which eventually leads to Kunal having physical changes and better in bed. What if Kunal and Priya eventually forge a bigger emotional and physical connection that is much more bigger than Kunal and Esha had. This will be a really cool dynamic that can add a certain thrill to the story. Many of this cheating stories have the wife and her new lover's relationship explored. I say lets take a unique approach , lets explore the husband and the woman who ruined his marriage relationship that can be explored. Because there is a cascade of emotions that can help carve out interesting situations and bonds never seen before.
Transformation of Priya's Character : Priya is definitely the title character , she has been and have been pretty much been the "Facilitator" in this story. But imagine if she genuinely starts to fall in love with Kunal in future developments. I would like to iterate some of the points from the earlier scenario and have Kunal actually understand Priya's reasoning for her actions and Priya realizes that Kunal was always a good man and Esha is a fool to let a man like him slip away from her grasp easily. Let Priya understand Kunal as a person up close and eventually have her slowly fall in love to his comfort and his dedication. This can be diluted in two ways where Kunal can be genuine with his side and they can become a happy couple or Kunal can be sinister and he will eventually make Priya experience a heartbreak. Either way a possible romance with Kunal could add more dynamic to Priya's character and the nature of their relationship can help evolve their characters further. More importantly I would love to see Priya evolve from her character as a manipulator and control freak to a loving woman who understands her mistakes and eventually dreams of a new life with Kunal.
Jealousy of Esha : THIS is definitely the part I will be looking forward to. Despite of her decisions , Esha still claims she "feels" for Kunal. I wonder what would be her reaction when she sees Kunal forming a relationship with not just another woman , but the very woman who was a mastermind in ruining her marriage. Will we finally see a more hypocritical side of Esha in the future with her witnessing Kunal and Priya getting close. A rather interesting part I would love to see is if Priya convinces Kunal to improve in his fitness and eventually Kunal transforms into what Priya desires and one day Esha witnesses Kunal and Priya in their time of intimacy at her place. It will be Esha's turn to be kicked to the corner. This will add much more dynamic to Esha's stance in her life right now. She claims she still "loves" Kunal but her thought process is completely engaged in Aniket and this pregnancy. I would like to point out the following sequence from part U to prove my point.
"I felt it, Aniket, the baby kicked!" Esha whispered, her voice quick with joy. "The first sign, it's amazing, right?"
Kunal's jaw tightened, the mention of Aniket and the baby a fresh wound. He tried to remain unseen, but Esha was too engrossed in her conversation to notice him.
"I have to be quick. I'll drop Aditya with Kunal, then see you at the clinic," she continued, her words tumbling out. "We'll see the baby's development on the ultrasound, I can't wait!"
Those words were like daggers, piercing Kunal's resolve. Here he was, trapped in this metal box, witnessing a new life forming without him, a life he had once imagined with Esha. The jealousy was a sharp, burning pain, not just for what he'd lost, but for what was being created in his absence.
Now this part of the chapter only adds fuel to Kunal's position in the current scenario and I don't want this to be used as a direct tit for tat approach. But Esha is happy with this pregnancy and her relation with Aniket at this point , and she is still finding happiness despite the hurt she had inflicted on Kunal. What is more curious about this factor is that Esha is happily talking about her unborn baby to Aniket expressing her happiness while at the same time a few minutes later she states to Kunal that this pregnancy is a mistake. She is finding reasoning for her cheating and trying to find justifications for her actions. Which is why I would definitely love Priya and Kunal to form a romantic relationship and their bond should grow right in front of Esha's eyes and either that will make her mind clear on what she wants , either she will completely forget Kunal and move with Aniket for good. Or she will get that pull , that familiar twinge she always had for Kunal and make her see her errors and try to find any hope for a reunion with him in the future. Its a fucked up situation , but I still believe Esha and Kunal can get a happy ending together if the story takes an interesting path.
That being said , once again I applaud the Author for another remarkable Part. Your handling of character dynamics is much appreciated and the way the story is developing , I am definitely looking forward to it. On a side note , I have used a "Kunal" character in my own story which I will admit is loosely inspired from here. However , the characters are completely different including origins as my vision for the character is something unique and I've been writing him as a thesis on my case studies and research regarding sexual relationships and sex life. I feel honored that you are also one of the writers that inspired me to start my stinct in story telling and now I understand the hardships you must be taking to complete each chapter. Anyways , All The Best for upcoming parts and wish you well for the future with more interesting stories like this.
With Love.
HARRY JORDAN
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