17-02-2025, 04:49 PM
(17-02-2025, 03:33 PM)val.coutinho Wrote: Good and marvellous update Sean..... It's good that they are recollecting their memories of how their affair started.... But it's unnecessary way of dragging the plot... Sorry to say this but I know it's your way of writing the story.... We all readers were expecting some action.... Like some romantic type of kissing or Hariya telling Anita to kiss his dick and also telling her that they are alone so she can use one of her hole which is her mouth to fulfill his wish.... There is no need of this repeated dialogues.... Atleast move forward with the plot.....
Thanks for the feedback. I welcome this constructive criticism and agree that the past few updates could have been written in a better way to move the story ahead. Will try to move the story forward now.