Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

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Very well written man, You could start your own story. 

The way you put your thoughts into words is nicely done. Though I do not agree with majority of the thoughts about Meera, its still wonderfully written. 

~RCF

An Absolute LEGENDARY writing! Big Salute! 

Dear RCF & Harry Jordan,

Your appreciation truly means a lot to me. Krish_999 created a masterpiece, and I simply added a small touch. I lack the imagination and writing skills, and I consider myself just an admirer (I hope you are teasing me).

As mentioned in my earlier post, I found it hard to believe in Meera's sudden change of heart, Desai's quick surrender regarding Meera, and Meera's carelessness leading to pregnancy. Meera is intelligent, Desai is cunning, and Krish is foolish. It's not appropriate to ask the author to rewrite this section or provide an epilogue justification, as he has already revised the final chapters. The climax is in this chapter, and the epilogue will only cover the aftermath. Epilogues usually reveal twists in suspense thrillers, which this story is not. That's why I attempted my own justification for my peace of mind rather than anyone else's. I addressed all perceived loopholes by incorporating inputs from various users.

RCF, you are the biggest supporter of Meera’s love for Krish and their eventual union. While I supported the ending, I was disheartened by her actions in earlier chapters, especially the 49th. Her dramatic change of heart and repentance seemed unbelievable without a strong reason. That's why I introduced Maitrei to help her see reality.

Maitrei has been intimate with both Desai and Krish. As a psychiatrist, she can see through a person's true character. Who else could help Meera realize her mistakes and correct her course at this crucial moment?

Many readers suggested that Desai might be using chemicals for his inhuman stamina in bed. I added the prosthetic angle to explain his enormous size and the sterility angle to assure Meera was indeed impregnated by Krish. Since Meera knows Desai's secrets, she doesn't idolize him—she knows his flaws, and in turn Desai knows that Meera is aware of his secrets. This makes him rely on role-playing as Krish to feed Meera's fantasies, eventually making her prefer the fantasy over reality. Desai is the most insecure character. When Meera called him out, comparing him to Krish, he ran away rather than be exposed. This way, he could still save face in front of Krish, who admired his performance but was unaware of his use of stimulants. Surrendering and running away was the only face saving option for Desai.

Meera was also confused by Krish's outburst and his determination to push her towards Desai, speaking of her freedom and her love lost or she being conquered. She needed to learn some truths from Nidhi. Although Nidhi didn't reveal Krish's presence during the encounter, she gave enough reasons for Meera to believe Krish knew everything that happened in Alpine Heights. Meera realized the extent of her mistake and the hurt she caused Krish. She resolved to end the game and fight to win Krish back, no matter what it took, even if it meant waiting for him. Nidhi was used for a revelation and to firm up Meera's resolve to fight for Krish.

I also imagined Meera warning Nidhi about Desai and revealing his secrets, guiding her towards a better path. This would explain Nidhi's eventual acceptance of an arranged marriage.

These are the justifications I came up with to address the loose ends and make the ending more believable. Aside from Meera's interactions with Maitrei and Nidhi, the ideas came from other insightful readers.

It’s uncertain if Krish_999 will release an epilogue or when. I believe he made a mistake by missing two deadlines for the final chapter, leading to extensive reader analysis.