Adultery Wife helps me become a cuckold

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Dear author the decision to end the story is yours and I am not commenting to change your mind. But to get a proper response from your writing, you yourself needed to put some more effort.
1. Your story so far was quite good andthe  buildup was great no doubt but the theme of the story was quite worn out. It needed more than just sex. It needed a plot.
2. To get response you need to engage. Posting one update and getting lost will not interest the readers. Maybe try it next time.
3. You're giving up pretty early. If you have a story to tell why don't put it out irrespective of the response. It's not like you're totally neglected by the readers.
4. Finally I think your story had potential and it's a crime you ending it so soon. Who knows if you kept at it, the story might have got more traction.

Alas, all the best dude. May you find what you are looking for.

I appreciate the honest feedback. But I have a few counter-arguments to make:

1. Your story so far was quite good andthe  buildup was great no doubt but the theme of the story was quite worn out. It needed more than just sex. It needed a plot.

Sex hadn't come up in the story until the last 2-3 updates. Until that point, I was very slowly and meticulously building up to it. And I don't disagree that the theme is overdone. But this is a theme that is quite close to me and my real-world experiences. Which is why I chose to write it.

2. To get response you need to engage. Posting one update and getting lost will not interest the readers. Maybe try it next time.

I've been posting 2-3 updates every week since September of last year. I was only away for the month of December in order to attend to some personal matters. Writing a story is not exactly easy. You don't just have to imagine the plot, you also have to make sure to express it in a way that not only makes sense to the readers but also excites them. Writing one single update takes 3-4 hours! That's a lot of time to contribute to something that you're giving away for free, while also juggling a full-time job, side-hustles and a family. 

You're giving up pretty early. If you have a story to tell why don't put it out irrespective of the response. It's not like you're totally neglected by the readers.

I'm not a professional writer. My motivation for writing these types of stories is for engagement. I've been writing and posting erotic stories since the early 2010s. The first erotic story I ever wrote was one of the most popular ones on the old xossip site with literally millions of views and hundreds of replies. And that's another thing. I'm not sure what happened, but the level of engagement and the quality of the comments back in the xossip days were far better than it is now. Now, it's basically just: 'update plz', 'waiting for next update', 'plz update, it's been so long'.... and that's assuming people comment at all! It's like the comments are all being written by the same exact person. 

Again, I do appreciate your feedback. But it's not motivating enough for me anymore. Hence why I'm leaving this story where it's at. I apologize if this doesn't sit well with some of the readers. Thanks and have a great day!