[Suraj76626]

Dear author the decision to end the story is yours and I am not commenting to change your mind. But to get a proper response from your writing, you yourself needed to put some more effort.
1. Your story so far was quite good andthe buildup was great no doubt but the theme of the story was quite worn out. It needed more than just sex. It needed a plot.
2. To get response you need to engage. Posting one update and getting lost will not interest the readers. Maybe try it next time.
3. You're giving up pretty early. If you have a story to tell why don't put it out irrespective of the response. It's not like you're totally neglected by the readers.
4. Finally I think your story had potential and it's a crime you ending it so soon. Who knows if you kept at it, the story might have got more traction.

Alas, all the best dude. May you find what you are looking for.