Adultery The Facilitator

[Saradagaa]

The idea for the story stems from a scenario where a wife cheats on her husband and subsequently becomes pregnant by her lover. We explored various outcomes instead of a predictable ending, in this story. A human emotions are not command to robot , so the emotional complexities need to be explored. 

Your writing is excellent, thanks to your partner who has literature back ground. I can say that it's at a professional level.

I don't know which language you think and translate into english but the vocabulary and sentence framing is extraordinary and apt.

Description of the environment is as good as in classical literature.

There is a novel in Telugu where in each character present it's POV, taking the readers along with them.
This is not exactly on similar lines but with a little bit of tweaking for Kunal as well as Isha characters, many more complex situations could be created.

Agreed it's about emotions. There is a large scope for making characters view from other character's perspective.

I believe that towards concluding chapters,  you would adopt such strategy. Your subtle hints all along are being noted. 

Finally, may be it's time for you to change your pen name and make your girl friend a part of the name to enjoy the fan following firsthand