Adultery The Facilitator

[a2011]

Honestly I don't think realistic approach can make a story like this work. Because if we consider a realistic approach we can never relate or love the characters considering the stupid and bold decisions they take. Realistically the story would never progress this much in a real time scenario. I've read a wonderful redemption story in Literotica where a man who is cheated by turns his life around. And it connected to me because the story and the character portrayal was done really well. In my opinion, Kunal's character is a perfect candidate for an "Underdog turned victor" story , and in a way it can make  sense because he has the motive for that drive. Me personally I am never a fan of a man undergoing all the sufferings and humiliation and then when its over,  he stays the same. That negates the point of his character.

I agree, I would like to see Kunal get fair treatment too, even though a transformation to a victor in my opinion is unnecessary....I'd also like to see some bad consequences to the other 3 characters, who seem to be all just acting like they're hurt for doing what they wanted all along...