Adultery The Facilitator

[Harry Jordan]

The idea for the story stems from a scenario where a wife cheats on her husband and subsequently becomes pregnant by her lover. We explored various outcomes instead of a predictable ending, in this story. A human emotions are not command to robot , so the emotional complexities need to be explored. 

I get that , and I can say you are doing a damn fine job exploring that. Before Part T I had my concerns regarding how Esha's mindet is in this story because she is not showing any sympathy or concern towards Kunal. But then part 2 of T finally showed it and it also helped understand Esha as a character. And I get that , the emotion play is done really well , Kunal is led by rage and anger of the betrayal he has endured , Esha despite betraying her husband is still finding solace with her lover. And Priya the orchestrator of this events all , is happy with the ruined marriage but concerned that her control is leaving her hands. 

And I can say honestly , I have no idea how this story will end because the emotions are overwhelming. I am actually having trouble to side with characters or to find a happy ending with this. But regardless stories like this is where the thrill of emotions actually controls the narrative. And this is definitely the right approach for a story like this. I am optimisitc that you guys will do a wonderful job with this story.