Adultery The Facilitator

[clearlover]

I am glad to hear that there is a collaborative approach to the story. And I applaud you both for the job well done because both you guys have some really good skills in literature. I get your approach of positives and negatives but at the end of the day , there needs to be definitive trait to characters that eventually reveal their nature that solidifies their aspect. I understand even a villain will consider him/herself the hero in this story and I can say that about a certain character in this story.

For now , I can say good job with this story because there is a lot of thought process involved with each chapter and everything is done very meticulously. All the best for the future chapters and the eventual conclusion of this story.

Wishing You Well.

 HARRY JORDAN  

The idea for the story stems from a scenario where a wife cheats on her husband and subsequently becomes pregnant by her lover. We explored various outcomes instead of a predictable ending, in this story. A human emotions are not command to robot , so the emotional complexities need to be explored.