Adultery The Facilitator

[Harry Jordan]

Thank you for your lovely comment; I am indebted. At this juncture, I would like to inform you that this story is a collaborative effort between my girlfriend and me. As students of literature, she provides a lot of input on maintaining flow, breaking monotony, and avoiding unnecessary details. Although the idea for the story is mine, her female perspective has been instrumental in moving the project forward. As I mentioned before, I believe every character has positive and negative aspects. The story does not aim to portray anyone as a villain or a hero; it's about the characters' perspectives, leaving it to the readers to decide who is right or wrong. I would also like to confess that the original idea was to publish the story on Amazon, which we might pursue based on the final response we receive here. Like many of you, my girlfriend is also critical of some of the ideas here, lol.

Note:-As I said before, this forum changes "SCH00L" to "College", read accordingly.

I am glad to hear that there is a collaborative approach to the story. And I applaud you both for the job well done because both you guys have some really good skills in literature. I get your approach of positives and negatives but at the end of the day , there needs to be definitive trait to characters that eventually reveal their nature that solidifies their aspect. I understand even a villain will consider him/herself the hero in this story and I can say that about a certain character in this story.

For now , I can say good job with this story because there is a lot of thought process involved with each chapter and everything is done very meticulously. All the best for the future chapters and the eventual conclusion of this story.

Wishing You Well.

 HARRY JORDAN