11-02-2025, 04:50 AM
Again , Great writing as usual . More Praise for you . Every update is better than last . This update was kind of Long , But the way you wrote not a single dull moment , Not a single line felt like filler , How could you do it ? If i may ask Whats the average time you spend from writing to editing for single chapter .
Now , My memory faded a little bit , I forget the starting of the story .
So, Kunal spilled some cold drink or coffee on Priya's thesis which supposed to be life changing for her .
So she decide to take revenge On Kunal and His wife Esha , who happens to be her friends too .
( I know I know , Dont correct me )
So , Priya is so called Feminist . Who clearly has no Idea that A women and A wife both are different thing . A women can fuck any man she wants , whenever she wants , She can carry anyone child , Its her body , Its her child , Its her responsibility But A Wife ? Cannot do those things . She herself said that Marriage is Contract and Esha violated that contract does she deserve Penalty for that .
So , Priya planned revenge to break them off , To destroy their marriage , She manipulated 34 year old women , who happens to be working in prestigious firm filled with intelligent people but of course she was not satisfied with her marriage and lust made people do stupid things . Okay .
So a Hansome hunk came , And Priya plotted , They fall in love , She cheated on Kunal , Kunal apologize to Esha for making her to cheat on him , Promised to be better husband . But she again cheated on him , Got pregnant . Decided to keep child okay , Fine with me .
Kunal sent divorce papers , She moved in with Aniket Her lover . Great decision to be honest .
Okay , Aditya custody Case :- The highly intellectual Kunal , Who somehow got the Job in USA firm found the worst lawyer for his case , where ESHA found the best and very cunning lawyer , who literally fucked him in the ass .
So , Priya got her Revenge from Kunal .
Kunal :- Lost his whole family , Wife cheated , Humiliated him, Got pregnant by His lover while still married to him, His whole world crumble in front of him , His years of hard work just vanished , Going to loose Custody of his son . Her wife choose to go with man who is better than him in every way .
ESHA :- Got the literally Handsome hunk who loved her , Sexually Satisfy her , Make her feel alive , Ready for marriage , will accept the Responsibility of Aditya and will be better father than Kunal ever be, Also Rich . She literally got massive update . Call her gold digger , bitch , whatever you want , But Jiska husband Kunal jaise C ho uski feeling ko smjho .
I know she felt pain and cried and etc etc etc but still does not feel like that she is actually sad , Because She has gain more than she lost . Its very small price for the future she is gonna built with her Lover , ANIKET .
Priya not only she got her revenge and She helped her friend to find a better Man for her . ESHA ko literally Thanks bolna chahiye Priya , Its because of Her she found the man of her dream , and she is gonna start her new family , Yeah , I know she might lost some respect among her family or peers but no one gives a fuck . And She will gonna get Aditya , How ? Again Priya The mediator . That Stupid Lawyer cannot even argue why Priya is misfit . She is bigger Idiot Than Kunal , Kunal deserve this lawyer.
Oh wait , I forget , While his whole world is falling apart , Mr. Kunal decided to become Sherlock Holmes . Okay lets assume eventually he is gonna find out its all Priya , but It still Does not explain or its not reverse the betrayal of ESHA , No matter if Priya literally throws her in the arms of Aniket its still ESHA's choice to fuck him and its still her choice to get pregnant by Him , Its still her choice to have a baby with Aniket . Priya perfectly Explain this to Mr. Kunal . OKay let him Play His little Detective Adventure .
Oh wait , Remind me , How old is Kunal ? 11 ? 14 ? 20 ? . He is fucking grown man. Here getting manipulated and shut by Priya . Priya literally made him to apologize . Acting like small child , I will not be surprise if Priya slapped him and make him to write I am sorry and ESHA was right 100 times ( Oh bhai marro mujhe , Mujhe aap chutti dede , main is duniya se vida lena chahta hoon
)
Men like Kunal deserved this , Everyone including me from the start blaming ESHA , I wanna ask could you blame her for choosing Aniket over This chutpaglu Insan ( sorry for my language ) .
Go girl , you made the right choice , Aniket is better man than Kunal . Judge should give aditya custody to ESHA , atleast he will not end up as stupid as his father .
Men like Kunal deserve this , I wanna believe ( for this story ) Laws are not Partial towards women , Here if Men like Kunal exist Its necessary The kid wont raise by Stupid pathetic loser like him. Just Imagine Yourself In place of Judge , Okay i accept ESHA is cheater but she not loser like him , while being pregnant She fought fiercely for her child , She found the best lawyer . And the best part is She could have Destroy Kunal's reputation easily but she choose not to , She showed mercy to him , for this alone Kunal should touch her feet and ask for forgiveness .
. The Kunal who is acting like He has upper hand on case , Has no Idea ESHA is literally holding herself back , If gives green light To her Lawyer he would chew and spit him out like cheap bugglebum .
Now I think the subject of the story shifted from Child custody Battle to Humiliation of Kunal.
To be honest , I am enjoying this , The last chapter , T was full of fun . I hope ESHA win this battle , She is literally an angel , Cooking biryani for the man she loves so much , and then * i skipped that part its was disgusting , Funny In sex story i am avoiding sex part*
. Also a bit sad , This whole encounter shows that She never loved Kunal the way she loves Aniket. Also now there is no coming back , I know it was established earliar that there is no way ESHA can fix her marriage . But Good for her .
ESHA and ANIKET Best couple You can see their chemistry and They love each other , They deserve a chance to built their family .
I wish in upcoming chapter , Kunal do something stupid and Aniket would beat the shit of him in front of Aditya , So Aditya finally see what a pathetic father he has , He also can finally move on and Accept Aniket as his father . For this story I am with Fierce Brave Feminist , PRIYA AND ESHA
who is teaching Kunal a male chauvinist .
I know I know I literally spewed so much poison against Kunal , Coz he deserve it.
( Note :- This comment is exaggerated comment , only for fun , I am not criticizing the writer or the plot or anything , I read the story and I write the comment based on written material )
Please Please Please Post an update ASAP !
( kidding please take as much as time you need )
PEACE OUT !

Now , My memory faded a little bit , I forget the starting of the story .
So, Kunal spilled some cold drink or coffee on Priya's thesis which supposed to be life changing for her .
So she decide to take revenge On Kunal and His wife Esha , who happens to be her friends too .
( I know I know , Dont correct me )
So , Priya is so called Feminist . Who clearly has no Idea that A women and A wife both are different thing . A women can fuck any man she wants , whenever she wants , She can carry anyone child , Its her body , Its her child , Its her responsibility But A Wife ? Cannot do those things . She herself said that Marriage is Contract and Esha violated that contract does she deserve Penalty for that .
So , Priya planned revenge to break them off , To destroy their marriage , She manipulated 34 year old women , who happens to be working in prestigious firm filled with intelligent people but of course she was not satisfied with her marriage and lust made people do stupid things . Okay .
So a Hansome hunk came , And Priya plotted , They fall in love , She cheated on Kunal , Kunal apologize to Esha for making her to cheat on him , Promised to be better husband . But she again cheated on him , Got pregnant . Decided to keep child okay , Fine with me .
Kunal sent divorce papers , She moved in with Aniket Her lover . Great decision to be honest .
Okay , Aditya custody Case :- The highly intellectual Kunal , Who somehow got the Job in USA firm found the worst lawyer for his case , where ESHA found the best and very cunning lawyer , who literally fucked him in the ass .
So , Priya got her Revenge from Kunal .
Kunal :- Lost his whole family , Wife cheated , Humiliated him, Got pregnant by His lover while still married to him, His whole world crumble in front of him , His years of hard work just vanished , Going to loose Custody of his son . Her wife choose to go with man who is better than him in every way .
ESHA :- Got the literally Handsome hunk who loved her , Sexually Satisfy her , Make her feel alive , Ready for marriage , will accept the Responsibility of Aditya and will be better father than Kunal ever be, Also Rich . She literally got massive update . Call her gold digger , bitch , whatever you want , But Jiska husband Kunal jaise C ho uski feeling ko smjho .

I know she felt pain and cried and etc etc etc but still does not feel like that she is actually sad , Because She has gain more than she lost . Its very small price for the future she is gonna built with her Lover , ANIKET .
Priya not only she got her revenge and She helped her friend to find a better Man for her . ESHA ko literally Thanks bolna chahiye Priya , Its because of Her she found the man of her dream , and she is gonna start her new family , Yeah , I know she might lost some respect among her family or peers but no one gives a fuck . And She will gonna get Aditya , How ? Again Priya The mediator . That Stupid Lawyer cannot even argue why Priya is misfit . She is bigger Idiot Than Kunal , Kunal deserve this lawyer.
Oh wait , I forget , While his whole world is falling apart , Mr. Kunal decided to become Sherlock Holmes . Okay lets assume eventually he is gonna find out its all Priya , but It still Does not explain or its not reverse the betrayal of ESHA , No matter if Priya literally throws her in the arms of Aniket its still ESHA's choice to fuck him and its still her choice to get pregnant by Him , Its still her choice to have a baby with Aniket . Priya perfectly Explain this to Mr. Kunal . OKay let him Play His little Detective Adventure .
Oh wait , Remind me , How old is Kunal ? 11 ? 14 ? 20 ? . He is fucking grown man. Here getting manipulated and shut by Priya . Priya literally made him to apologize . Acting like small child , I will not be surprise if Priya slapped him and make him to write I am sorry and ESHA was right 100 times ( Oh bhai marro mujhe , Mujhe aap chutti dede , main is duniya se vida lena chahta hoon

Men like Kunal deserved this , Everyone including me from the start blaming ESHA , I wanna ask could you blame her for choosing Aniket over This chutpaglu Insan ( sorry for my language ) .
Go girl , you made the right choice , Aniket is better man than Kunal . Judge should give aditya custody to ESHA , atleast he will not end up as stupid as his father .
Men like Kunal deserve this , I wanna believe ( for this story ) Laws are not Partial towards women , Here if Men like Kunal exist Its necessary The kid wont raise by Stupid pathetic loser like him. Just Imagine Yourself In place of Judge , Okay i accept ESHA is cheater but she not loser like him , while being pregnant She fought fiercely for her child , She found the best lawyer . And the best part is She could have Destroy Kunal's reputation easily but she choose not to , She showed mercy to him , for this alone Kunal should touch her feet and ask for forgiveness .

Now I think the subject of the story shifted from Child custody Battle to Humiliation of Kunal.
To be honest , I am enjoying this , The last chapter , T was full of fun . I hope ESHA win this battle , She is literally an angel , Cooking biryani for the man she loves so much , and then * i skipped that part its was disgusting , Funny In sex story i am avoiding sex part*

ESHA and ANIKET Best couple You can see their chemistry and They love each other , They deserve a chance to built their family .

I wish in upcoming chapter , Kunal do something stupid and Aniket would beat the shit of him in front of Aditya , So Aditya finally see what a pathetic father he has , He also can finally move on and Accept Aniket as his father . For this story I am with Fierce Brave Feminist , PRIYA AND ESHA

I know I know I literally spewed so much poison against Kunal , Coz he deserve it.
( Note :- This comment is exaggerated comment , only for fun , I am not criticizing the writer or the plot or anything , I read the story and I write the comment based on written material )
Please Please Please Post an update ASAP !

( kidding please take as much as time you need )
PEACE OUT !