Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

[RCF]

Krrish, you are a wonderful  writer. This story will always stay in my heart, and Meera and Krrish feel so real, as if they truly exist in this world. But I have to say, you messed up the last chapter this time.

In the previous chapter, Krrish was letting Meera go, and she was reluctant to move on—something that was always the other way around. Krrish was always the one fighting to bring her back. So when Meera took on that role this time, it felt refreshing and powerful. I was excited to see her prove her unwavering love for Krrish, to show him that Desai meant nothing to her, and to fight for their love. At first, the final chapter seemed to be heading in that direction, but then suddenly, Meera gave in. Just because Desai was taking her to meet his parents, she seemed to forget Krrish in an instant! That didn’t feel like the Meera we’ve come to know. The deep, passionate love between her and Krrish seemed to disappear all of a sudden, and it made her look as if she was more desperate for sex and the pleasure Desai gives her in bed rather than the love she shared with Krrish. This felt completely out of character for her and was disappointing.

Additionally, the ending felt rushed. Their reunion didn’t have enough depth—it seemed forced rather than an emotional, well-earned moment. And I have to admit, a part of me is also a little unsatisfied that the anal sex between Desai and Meera didn’t happen again. I understand that it might not have fit the story’s flow, but it still felt like something was missing.

That being said, I truly congratulate you on finishing this story. It has been an amazing journey, and I hope you continue to give us more stories to cherish in the future.

The greatness of this story is seen when you see old readers come out and comment for the first time.

"In the previous chapter, Krrish was letting Meera go, and she was reluctant to move on—something that was always the other way around. Krrish was always the one fighting to bring her back. So when Meera took on that role this time, it felt refreshing and powerful."

Great point. I missed this one, yes for the first time its not Meera who walked out but Krish in last chapter and it did feel refreshing and last chapter was supposed to be her fighting for Krish but it turned other way round again.

"At first, the final chapter seemed to be heading in that direction, but then suddenly, Meera gave in. Just because Desai was taking her to meet his parents, she seemed to forget Krrish in an instant! That didn’t feel like the Meera we’ve come to know. The deep, passionate love between her and Krrish seemed to disappear all of a sudden, and it made her look as if she was more desperate for sex and the pleasure Desai gives her in bed rather than the love she shared with Krrish. "

Meera did not give in easily, if you see from Desai's perspective then yes it would seem that she gave in as soon as he came to the house and few drinks then they are making out, but look at this from her perspective and Krish..she has been fighting Krish not to end things since 3-4 weeks and trying to reach out to him again and again in different means, even when they were drunk you can see that she tiptoes to Krish and gave Krish one last kiss, trying to pull him in again..she let go of him once he pushed her again...she was responding to Desai but its written clearly that her heart is craving for Krish and looking for him to stop this madness.

She gave in because she is tired of trying to reach out again and again for Krish....When Desai went to restroom, she knew where this was going, she went to Krish to pull him into a kiss and show her desperation one last time but when Krish pushed her again, she was hurt and wantedly did things to hurt Krish back, her comments on Krish being heartless, deserve to sit and watch, why do you care about dream...are all things she said to hurt him back for her own pain she is going through because of Krish's persistence to break marriage. 

Like I said the writing to show Desai as cuckold and how Meera finds out are all exceptionally written.The plot felt weak that's all. The reunion was missing the spark and felt bland, Pregnancy was used as easy means to stitch the difference, else this is very good chapter overall. Hopefully we have an epilogue where couple discuss many things and we see young Jr.Krish.

~RCF