10-02-2025, 06:58 PM
Krrish, you are a wonderful writer. This story will always stay in my heart, and Meera and Krrish feel so real, as if they truly exist in this world. But I have to say, you messed up the last chapter this time.
In the previous chapter, Krrish was letting Meera go, and she was reluctant to move on—something that was always the other way around. Krrish was always the one fighting to bring her back. So when Meera took on that role this time, it felt refreshing and powerful. I was excited to see her prove her unwavering love for Krrish, to show him that Desai meant nothing to her, and to fight for their love. At first, the final chapter seemed to be heading in that direction, but then suddenly, Meera gave in. Just because Desai was taking her to meet his parents, she seemed to forget Krrish in an instant! That didn’t feel like the Meera we’ve come to know. The deep, passionate love between her and Krrish seemed to disappear all of a sudden, and it made her look as if she was more desperate for sex and the pleasure Desai gives her in bed rather than the love she shared with Krrish. This felt completely out of character for her and was disappointing.
Additionally, the ending felt rushed. Their reunion didn’t have enough depth—it seemed forced rather than an emotional, well-earned moment. And I have to admit, a part of me is also a little unsatisfied that the anal sex between Desai and Meera didn’t happen again. I understand that it might not have fit the story’s flow, but it still felt like something was missing.
That being said, I truly congratulate you on finishing this story. It has been an amazing journey, and I hope you continue to give us more stories to cherish in the future.
In the previous chapter, Krrish was letting Meera go, and she was reluctant to move on—something that was always the other way around. Krrish was always the one fighting to bring her back. So when Meera took on that role this time, it felt refreshing and powerful. I was excited to see her prove her unwavering love for Krrish, to show him that Desai meant nothing to her, and to fight for their love. At first, the final chapter seemed to be heading in that direction, but then suddenly, Meera gave in. Just because Desai was taking her to meet his parents, she seemed to forget Krrish in an instant! That didn’t feel like the Meera we’ve come to know. The deep, passionate love between her and Krrish seemed to disappear all of a sudden, and it made her look as if she was more desperate for sex and the pleasure Desai gives her in bed rather than the love she shared with Krrish. This felt completely out of character for her and was disappointing.
Additionally, the ending felt rushed. Their reunion didn’t have enough depth—it seemed forced rather than an emotional, well-earned moment. And I have to admit, a part of me is also a little unsatisfied that the anal sex between Desai and Meera didn’t happen again. I understand that it might not have fit the story’s flow, but it still felt like something was missing.
That being said, I truly congratulate you on finishing this story. It has been an amazing journey, and I hope you continue to give us more stories to cherish in the future.