10-02-2025, 02:04 AM
(09-02-2025, 04:53 PM)Fuckstar Wrote: I think you missed one update here..... In the last update Riya was having an heart to heart talk with Meera..... Now in these updates Meera is now watching Riya with these 2 labours.... There has to be an update where we need to know if Riya went to them on her own or did they force her to go there?
How did Meera reach there?
I think this is the part you missed.
Thanks for catching this. When I wrote this scene, Meera was supposed to be going on a morning walk and seeing Riya being stopped by these laborers, and then she followed them. But while editing and checking for mistakes, that part got omitted. I will fix that in the Novel and later on, see how I can fix it here. Seeing comments like these really helps us; it gives us motivation to write it correctly.
Thanks Again for being involved in the story and making an effort to provide feedback.
Deepak Kapoor
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My work: Innocent Beauty Series
Author on amazon
My work: Innocent Beauty Series
- An Innocent Beauty
- An Innocent Beauty Continues Part 2
- An Innocent Beauty Complicated
- Bound by Honor: A Love Beyond Limits