08-02-2025, 10:52 AM
(08-02-2025, 01:24 AM)RCF Wrote: Awesome series is coming to an end. Instead of feeling impatience for the last chapter, I am feeling worse that this story will not be there after this weekend to think and dwell sometimes about our fav characters.
I have felt this way before the end of part 2 last chapter too. At that time, we didn’t know there would be part 3 and Krish never confirmed it is the end of series but this time it is ending permanently. Its good and bad for hard core fans…You will be relieved of the series, but you will miss it too. It happens rarely for a story here and that’s the beauty of Krish_999’s writing. He wrote many stories before, but this one stands out as his masterpiece.
I have read many stories since the days of exbii -> Xossipy. Some of the excellent writers like Aurelius, Shiprat , Bdrew, Game40it, Darksam, DevilMaycry and many more from different sections. They are all so talented and their writing just brings out the scenes live before you…sometimes they play with the plot, take liberties, set precedents that plot is simple but most of the focus is on graphical writing on sexual parts. Take for example story called “Wife and Mechanic” It’s a great read. I mean you know the context, you know the wife will sleep with the mechanic right before you even delve in to the story but yet the plot and how it happens, the description will make it hardcore, and you will love it despite you know that its about a wife cheating with Mechanic. Majority of the writers I named depend on the writing part of actual sex scenes and how the plot is developed around it. I have rarely seen writers write a story like a novel, expanding it to be a series, only few bring out strong emotions – some from Bdrew, some from Game40it are exceptional but this story from Krish_999 stands out and wins over all of them for me. This is an epic that can be posted anywhere and, on any platform, yet will win it all. The emotions that this one brings out tell us how extraordinary this story is among all the greatest writings. I have said before and will say it one last time, Krish_999 can have parallel side income lol if he wishes to write more. His strength is many unique dialogues and plot and with it the emotions he can bring to the table.
Having said that, let’s go through all the things that can be added to the last chapter to bring conclusion to this epic series. Listing the more obvious one’s on the top…
1. Meera’s perspective on Krish and Desai and her feelings. Obviously, her choice and ending depend on it.
2. Krish’s fantasies – ended or not (Did he change or not)- This will also give us a glimpse of his future whether it is with Meera or not doesn’t matter.
3. Desai’s manipulations – Things that were not explored before like fire accident, some subtle manipulations, whether he is in cahoots with anyone...Will there be exposure to his real nature? Or Does story end with the conclusion that he really changed, anyways final send off for all three main characters is a must.
4. Desai’s love for Meera – Apart from his manipulations, we also need to see if he truly loves her or not…in the past we found her pic in his purse.
5. If ending is with couple – Their future plan for reviving their sex life is every important. Lost bond, intimacy needs to be brought back.
6. Maithrei – What’s her final equation with Desai…Would she be the same if Desai did not leave her alone? What’s her final role in the subplot, Final payoff for her
7. Nidhi – Same as above, final payoff for her and her mother.
8. Piyush – Whether Meera ends up with Krish or Desai, Piyush is one person who knows it all, so final goodbye to him makes sense.
9. Ananya & Sam – what happened to them later, they never came up again but one final glimpse of how they have been since Desai left them…or did he leave them or not? Or still using her for his business needs, also why did Meera think Ananya herself want to be with Desai and did not believe Krish when he said Desai made her sleep with his friends. Is Krish over thinking here about Ananya or is Meera not thinking with brain lol…so a final goodbye to them.
10. Context of spitting in the mouth...its significance and why Meera gave it to Desai.
11. What happens to VVS company at the end…Meera says it’s his baby, but it came from Desai so not much convincing if it still is with Desai at the end.
12. Any final send off for characters like Tejas, Harish ...Ashish?
13. If ending with Desai -Then future? With Krish – Then plans for baby? Job?
14. Will there be an epilogue?
If other readers can think of any subplots, characters… please list. Thanks
Another thing has tobe clarified, funking a lady four time in a span of 3 to5 hours will not be possible even at the age og middle 30s where how it is possible for Mr Desai in middle 50s, though he is a sex maniac,it has tobe clarified is he taking drugs or not