Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III
(07-02-2025, 11:29 PM)DeanWinchester00007 Wrote: Sorry, But 50 chapters disagree with you  Tongue . More , The re- written chapters greatly disagree with you . Just think why would a writer restart his story just to give same ending again ? There is no logic to restart a story and give the same ending . 

Because earlier ending did not address many open questions - 1. Krish's cuckold nature 2. Meera and her feelings truly for Desai, She gave some example of food but it did not address her behavior on many occasions. 3. Krish and Meera future sex life and how to get better at it 4. Couple did not discuss if not Desai will there ever be a next one? 4. No pay offs for other characters 5. Also the ending was abrupt with a big chapter of sex with Desai to show Krish that she moved on but it was not smooth as an end to the series. If Krish(author) was satisfied he would have never considered a rewrite. In his mind he surely must have felt that he did not do justice to lot of characters hence the rewrite not necessarily mean that ending should be different.


What I believe this time KRISH chooses unconventional way to write the story , Where he often change the narrative and constantly evolved plot by reading the reader's comment . That  is why something about this PART III that does not feels right. The characters are not feel natural .

Its not unconventional, As I mentioned in one of the comments, he took this part further and showed natural progression if there is no fight between Krish and Meera and If Desai is not villain in this story as Nidhi claimed in last ending...It showed how Meera could get more and more addicted to him...and how Krish can lose his wife...but did he or not we will know next..I after reading all these chapters feel this rewritten version more complete than the old one.
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Chapter-1 - by krish_999 - 10-10-2020, 04:53 AM
RE: Chapter-1 - by Givemeextra - 10-10-2020, 11:00 AM
Chapter - 2 - by krish_999 - 17-10-2020, 01:04 AM
Chapter - 3 - by krish_999 - 23-10-2020, 11:52 PM
Chapter-5 - by krish_999 - 04-11-2020, 11:47 PM
Chapter - Six - by krish_999 - 12-11-2020, 07:57 PM
Chapter-7 - by krish_999 - 19-11-2020, 07:11 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 24-11-2020, 04:15 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 25-11-2020, 11:45 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 10:00 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 11:05 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by RCF - 08-02-2025, 01:21 AM



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