04-02-2025, 04:25 AM
Nice Update . Well , I already said that I am fan of your writing , Part T from literary point of view is very good but overall i think its one of weakest .
Finally, KUNAL woke up . I wanna thanks to you for not turning him into CUCK . You see how story turns out to interesting , The Husband character really add new dimension and chaos to the story . Kunal reaction was very natural and Logical too . Though I thought his reaction was calm , There should have been more anger and more dialogue exchange and more fight but again Its was better than to be CUCK . I understand Kunal is calm minded and simple Man , He did the right thing . Finally Divorce is happening , Best decision he ever make . And as for Aditya , That is what happens when father stay away from kid and mother take care of children , Children often neglect their father's role, Kunal helplessness shows that He alone cannot fulfill Aditya's life , He is kid and her mother was his primary caregiver he cant stay from her for long time . At some time Kunal will see this and Let Esha have him , and its good for him . What I dont like is Kunal again went on behind the curtain . He is just vanished again . I wanted more of him . But again At this point I dont wanna bargain more , I am happy that he is not cuck .
And also Changing the demeanor of Priya from Revenge taking bitch to caregiver angel is not good . Now i see she will turn into good guys , accept her mistake and help Esha to get her family back or definitely get Aditya back to her . Or Kunal will expose her or get his family back . Both are worst possible ending . I see the end of story is gonna be Good ending . Kunal though he lost everything he still has his child , He will share joint custody thanks to Law , Esha can easily destroy his life but she will not, Esha and aniket will get married, raising their kid together . etc etc . Aniket turns out to be better Man than Kunal . What i dont like is How easy Aniket got everything , a wife , child and probably A New life .
Thanks to writer for not following that Old cliche cuckold route .
Finally, KUNAL woke up . I wanna thanks to you for not turning him into CUCK . You see how story turns out to interesting , The Husband character really add new dimension and chaos to the story . Kunal reaction was very natural and Logical too . Though I thought his reaction was calm , There should have been more anger and more dialogue exchange and more fight but again Its was better than to be CUCK . I understand Kunal is calm minded and simple Man , He did the right thing . Finally Divorce is happening , Best decision he ever make . And as for Aditya , That is what happens when father stay away from kid and mother take care of children , Children often neglect their father's role, Kunal helplessness shows that He alone cannot fulfill Aditya's life , He is kid and her mother was his primary caregiver he cant stay from her for long time . At some time Kunal will see this and Let Esha have him , and its good for him . What I dont like is Kunal again went on behind the curtain . He is just vanished again . I wanted more of him . But again At this point I dont wanna bargain more , I am happy that he is not cuck .
And also Changing the demeanor of Priya from Revenge taking bitch to caregiver angel is not good . Now i see she will turn into good guys , accept her mistake and help Esha to get her family back or definitely get Aditya back to her . Or Kunal will expose her or get his family back . Both are worst possible ending . I see the end of story is gonna be Good ending . Kunal though he lost everything he still has his child , He will share joint custody thanks to Law , Esha can easily destroy his life but she will not, Esha and aniket will get married, raising their kid together . etc etc . Aniket turns out to be better Man than Kunal . What i dont like is How easy Aniket got everything , a wife , child and probably A New life .
Thanks to writer for not following that Old cliche cuckold route .