Adultery A husband's mistake - A wife's transformation

[PingpongDingdong]

I used to tell a story to my younger cousin. And it goes like this.. there was an ant and it was feeling hungry and it went outside, found a pile of sugar and he grabbed a single piece of sugar and carried it back all the way to his home and again he went outside and went all the way to the pile and picked another piece of sugar and brought it back. So the story goes on and on until the cousin gets tired and sleep off. I can relate this story to the similar kind. This will continue until we stop reading it. Man how many characters are there in this story.  More and more characters. What are you planning to say brother?  Please take an anchor and write your story around it. Please reduce the number of characters, readers are getting lost. It would been really hot if there was some kind of heat between Sukanya and Sharath.  You are wasting Praveen’s character too. Introducing new characters like Charan with no character actively pursuing Sukanya. As a reader this is tiring man. Take a break brother