01-02-2025, 11:17 PM
Hi Kuttoosan,
I am still not able to figure out 2 things here in this story..... Maybe you would clear them up in future.....
1. This is Jaya's story and Ashima is a side character but lately I feel that her character is getting same treatment as Jaya's, which is fine considering it is providing something new to the readers. But what I don't understand is why is Raghu hellbent on ruining Ashima's marriage..... Reason why I am asking this is that we all know about Raghu's past and the culprits here are Jaya's husband and in laws and not Ashima's.... If Raghu would have been trying to ruin Jaya's marriage or her family reputation then the plot would have made sense that he is taking his revenge..... But he is doing this Ashima whereas all these things he should do with Jaya.....
2. I remember in one of your comments you said that the main hero of this story is someone who is yet to be introduced..... Which we all now know is Mani's uncle..... You said that he would lead all these men in the story going forward..... But why would Mani's uncle help Raghu in getting his revenge?? What would inspire him to do this?? Because at the end Raghu is one of the lovers of our heroine Jaya and I would have been in place of Mani's uncle I would try to remove all lovers from Jaya's life so that I can keep Jaya all to myself..... I wouldn't help one of her lover's to get his revenge.....
I am still not able to figure out 2 things here in this story..... Maybe you would clear them up in future.....
1. This is Jaya's story and Ashima is a side character but lately I feel that her character is getting same treatment as Jaya's, which is fine considering it is providing something new to the readers. But what I don't understand is why is Raghu hellbent on ruining Ashima's marriage..... Reason why I am asking this is that we all know about Raghu's past and the culprits here are Jaya's husband and in laws and not Ashima's.... If Raghu would have been trying to ruin Jaya's marriage or her family reputation then the plot would have made sense that he is taking his revenge..... But he is doing this Ashima whereas all these things he should do with Jaya.....
2. I remember in one of your comments you said that the main hero of this story is someone who is yet to be introduced..... Which we all now know is Mani's uncle..... You said that he would lead all these men in the story going forward..... But why would Mani's uncle help Raghu in getting his revenge?? What would inspire him to do this?? Because at the end Raghu is one of the lovers of our heroine Jaya and I would have been in place of Mani's uncle I would try to remove all lovers from Jaya's life so that I can keep Jaya all to myself..... I wouldn't help one of her lover's to get his revenge.....