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(Yesterday, 02:33 AM)RCF Wrote: While erotica often follows this pattern, the problem is not just about Desai being “good in bed” but rather how the author uses it to repeatedly justify his actions and glorify his character. There’s a fine line between using a trope and excessively indulging in it to the point of unrealistic hero-worship.
Yes, glorifying his prowess in bed is necessary to make Krish see it and imagine Desai and his wife, that’s the plot. If you go back to earlier chapters, The whole point of Desai seducing Ananya and Maithrei is to show to Krish how well he can use them on bed and satisfy them to prove it to him that he has done similar things to his wife in the past and Meera was lying to him when she said she did not enjoy it and there by planting a seed of ecstasy in his mind who is already addicted to fantasies. Glorifying Desai is important for this story esp. when it comes to what he can offer on bed because Meera is not new to affairs, so why would she cross emotional barrier with Desai? Obviously, Desai needs to be above all men that she had affairs previously. For me I see the author’s intent here and there is nothing wrong with how he arced Desai. I only have problems with his character’s dynamic change as a good person which should never change. If once a cuck always is a cuck then once a manipulative, shrewd, unfaithful person will always be same. Maybe it will be revealed in the last chapter.
Love without loyalty or respect is meaningless. If Meera truly values Krish, why has she been so easily manipulated by Desai multiple times? If Meera is mature, she should have seen through Desai’s manipulations earlier, not just now.
Do not talk about loyalty in this story only for Meera. Krish is far worse than Meera in this respect. He is the one responsible for their lives in a major portion. He was neither loyal nor man enough to question his insecurities. Think about the time when Desai was even trying to get to talk to Meera and using Krish to get his way, knowing about Desai, what he had done to Ananya, Maithrei, he couldn’t keep Desai away from his own wife and fell for his fantasies and it became an obsession and he succumbed to Desai’s will and brought him into their life. If knowing so much back then, Krish thought Desai changed, does that mean Krish doesn’t love his wife? So, how can readers question now Meera’s love because she could not see Desai’s manipulations?
That’s a fair point, but transformation is a process. The fact that Krish is now heartbroken instead of aroused by the situation shows a shift in his mindset. The final chapter should confirm whether this change is permanent.
Of course he would be heart broken, if Meera was plain fucking with Desai and no bond, Krish would have taken his dick out underneath the bed in Alpine heights. So, his shift in his mindset is not because of his change in cuck nature but seeing her bond with Desai made him heartbroken so he couldn’t enjoy it. Like I said earlier, Krish needs to hate himself for losing Meera, for him being a cuck all these months, that realization is not yet shown or written. His consciousness needs to acknowledge and should hate his cuckold nature. He is still thinking if not Desai, someone else but he did not acknowledge a change in himself. That realization is important for him if he needs to reunite with Meera.
That’s understandable, but the signs are already clear. Desai’s manipulations, Meera’s naivety, and Krish’s suffering have been ongoing themes. The resolution should bring justice to these characters rather than another forced plot twist to redeem Desai.
There won’t be redemption for Desai, he will suffer the loss of Meera, plain and clear. If the author chooses to give Meera to Desai, then it would be solely for Meera to choose to be with him to let go of Krish, so he gets a better life devoid of fantasies.
I appreciate your perspective, and I agree that erotica often follows certain storytelling tropes. However, my critique isn’t about whether Desai needs to be portrayed as sexually dominant - it’s about how that dominance is used to justify or excuse his repeated manipulations, which is where I think the story risks glorifying the wrong character. Yes, erotic stories often feature a powerful third party, but good storytelling should still make sense within the plot.
Other than Nidhi part which I have mentioned already that is a manipulation, I did not see Desai sexual prowess being used to wipe his crimes. If you are purely talking about Meera and Desai’s sexual encounters and the bond that was forged by Desai’s manipulating Meera, then I gave my thoughts in earlier para. If this was only the first part or only story in the series then you are 100% right but this is a series with lot of past for Meera with various men, and she was always portrayed as faithful to Krish and her love for him, if the plot was to make Meera go beyond an affair and get emotionally involved then Desai needed to be the person who not only brings best in bed but also give her things that she was missing in her life with Krish...that she has not encountered ever in her life.
Meera might claim to love Krish, but love is more than words - it’s choices. If she truly valued him, she would not have been so easily swayed by Desai repeatedly. At some point, emotional maturity must override desire and manipulation.
There is a whole part written for this conclusion, Desai worked hard to be here and it took whole part, the careful planning, the involvement of Krish and his weakness, His careful reminders to Meera, Acknowledging her love for Krish and maintaining that he is only here for fun, then the reveal of photo there by slowly injecting that his love is a secret that he never wanted to share, then his promises that he wouldn’t seek her for his love but only be her lover, and at last breaking Krish, so tell me you think then was she easily swayed or was it easy for Desai? Her swaying part was only written in chapter 48 onwards…This is pure mastery in storytelling. Do not think it is easy to write such a way and his writing on Desai is top notch, no other story here has such a dominating character who can bring a couple like Meera and Krish to their knees with logic, planning and carefully planned shrewd subtlety.
~RCF
I appreciate your detailed breakdown, and I do agree that the author has written Desai’s manipulations in a very calculated and structured way. However, my concern is not about how 'well-written' Desai’s arc is, but about how the story risks justifying his actions. Just because someone’s scheme is well-planned doesn’t make it any less toxic, destructive, or cruel.
Meera might have taken time to be manipulated, but the fact remains - she was manipulated. Whether it took one chapter or a whole series, Desai's tactics were designed to break her emotional barriers and erode her resistance. Should we admire that? Or should we call it out for what it is - predatory and selfish?
Krish, no doubt, had his own flaws. He was weak, insecure, and complicit in his own downfall. But let’s not pretend that Desai wasn’t the real villain here. If we excuse his behavior as just 'part of the plot,' we are letting manipulation be treated as an art rather than a violation of trust.
At the end of the day, love is about respect and honesty. Desai represents neither. If the story is heading towards justice, then Desai must face real consequences - ones that don’t let him walk away with pride, but with the full weight of what he’s done.
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Desai is a manipulator who keeps pushing Meera despite the destruction he has already caused. Meera is now realizing his true nature but is stuck in a tough situation due to Krish’s erratic behavior. Before I respond, let me bring attention to this scene, which perfectly illustrates Desai’s manipulative mindset:
"My chest tightened, but I understood. ‘Okay, but at least unblock Desai.’
She didn’t say anything, just picked up her phone and unlocked it. I watched as her fingers worked quickly to unblock Desai, and no sooner had she done that than her phone buzzed. Desai was calling. She hesitated.
‘Put it on speaker,’ I urged.
Meera answered the call, putting it on speaker mode.
Desai’s voice came through loud and clear, carrying an unfamiliar warmth. ‘I was just dialing your number because I had a dream about you.’
Meera blinked, clearly curious. ‘A dream? What about?’
Desai’s tone softened, and I could almost hear the smile in his voice. ‘It was a beautiful one. I was walking down a quiet street, and I came across you. You were leaning against a pole, smiling at me. I asked you what you were doing, and you told me you were waiting for me. I can’t even describe how that felt in the dream. It was as if time stood still. I wish I could meet you like that in real life – standing there, waiting for me. That’s why I called, and I noticed you unblocked my number.’
Meera shifted uncomfortably, her voice a little nervous. ‘Krish made me unblock you.’ She glanced at me, embarrassed. ‘And he’s sitting close.’
Desai’s Dirty Mindset & Manipulation:
Now, let’s talk about Desai’s real intentions here. This is classic emotional manipulation. He knows Meera and Krish’s relationship is already shattered, but instead of backing off, he immediately tests the waters to see if Meera will respond to his tactics again. That ‘dream’ he describes? It’s not a dream at all - it’s a calculated move to create a romantic, nostalgic image in Meera’s mind and lure her back into his control. He deliberately brings up the unblocking as if it were fate, when in reality, it was Krish who made it happen.
Meera's hesitation, nervousness, and indirect response show that she has realized Desai's true nature. She is no longer the easily manipulated woman he once controlled. But she’s also in a tough spot - Krish isn’t thinking clearly, and she knows an outburst against Desai right now could make things worse. So, instead, she plays neutral. She knows she must wait for the perfect moment to expose Desai for who he really is and cut him off for good.
As for Krish, his emotions are all over the place. Instead of recognizing Desai's game, he's acting out of impulse. And that’s exactly what Desai wants - he thrives on emotional weakness, whether it’s Krish’s obsession or Meera’s past confusion. The only way to beat a manipulator like Desai is to deny him control over emotions. Meera needs to make her move wisely - play along for now, then strike when Desai least expects it and remove him from their lives completely.
If this story wants to deliver real justice, Desai should be exposed, humiliated, and left powerless. Anything less would be another excuse for his actions.
(This scene is exactly why Desai is irredeemable. Even after destroying a family, he is still playing his manipulative games, trying to lure Meera back in with sweet words and calculated timing. His 'dream' isn’t a coincidence - it’s his way of testing the waters to see if Meera will fall for his tactics again. Classic emotional manipulation!
But here’s what’s different: Meera is no longer blind. She knows exactly what kind of man Desai is. The only reason she isn’t lashing out at him yet is because she realizes Krish is emotionally unstable and not thinking straight. She needs to handle things carefully - reacting aggressively now could push Krish further into confusion instead of making him see the truth.
Krish, on the other hand, is acting like a teenager. His emotions are clouding his judgment. Instead of calmly processing the situation and standing firm, he’s letting Desai dictate his reactions. This is where Meera needs to act smart - wait for the right moment to expose Desai completely and cut him off for good.
Desai thrives on confusion and emotional weakness. The only way to defeat a manipulator like him is to deny him control - which is exactly what Meera should do next. If the story wants to do justice, it should lead to Desai’s complete downfall, not another excuse for his actions.)
The Truth About Desai & Meera's Realization
Desai is a man driven by pure lust, not love. His actions are nothing more than those of a predator looking for easy prey. When Meera cheated in Alpine Heights, she was caught up in the thrill - the forbidden pleasure, the reckless excitement, the heat of being desired so intensely. She let herself fall into the trap of lust.
But pleasure and lust are fleeting, and now, reality has set in. The regret is crushing her. That’s why she confessed to Krish before he even exposed her - because deep down, Meera knows that Krish’s love is irreplaceable. Without Krish, there is no real pleasure, no meaning, no depth.
Meera has had sex with other men before, even similar affairs, but Krish never reacted like this. This time is different. She can feel it in his eyes, in his rage, in his pain. For the first time, she fears truly losing him. She realizes that while lust made her feel powerful in the moment, it is love that makes her whole.
Desai, on the other hand, is the complete opposite.
Look at his actions - he doesn’t care about Meera’s regret. He doesn’t care about her emotions, her broken heart, or the storm inside her marriage. All he wants is to manipulate her back into his trap.
He saw that Meera unblocked him and immediately called - not out of love, but to reestablish control.
He spun a fake dream story, making it sound like fate, like destiny - a classic manipulator’s move.
He ignored her hesitation, her discomfort - because her feelings don’t matter to him, only her body does.
If Meera gives in to Desai now, he will throw her away like used garbage. He will never respect her, because he knows too much. He will always see her as a weak, easy woman who cheated once and can be made to do it again.
But Meera is not that woman anymore.
She has seen the truth behind Desai’s mask. There is no future with him - only ruin. That’s why she is choosing to stay silent, to play neutral, to wait. Because now, her mission is clear:
Desai needs to be exposed.
And he will be.
There is someone in the background, a catalyst, a person who will reveal Desai for the fraud he truly is. Meera may have been blinded before, but now her eyes are open. She knows that if she fights Desai directly right now, it will make things worse with Krish. The best thing to do is wait for the perfect moment and let Desai’s own filth be his downfall.
Desai’s so-called "prime" is ending soon with the age. The charm, the seduction, the power he once had over Meera is slipping away. And once she gets rid of him for good, she will have to fight for Krish - because she knows that no amount of pleasure, no amount of sex, can ever replace the love they shared.
This story is about lust, betrayal, and redemption and I trust the author to bring it all together in the most incredible way.
Let’s wait for the next chapters and see Desai get exactly what he deserves.
Thank you for reading!