Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III
(Yesterday, 02:20 AM)RCF Wrote: The way the author keeps glorifying Desai’s so-called unmatched stamina and lasting power in bed is honestly laughable! Are we seriously supposed to believe that Desai is some kind of Greek God-Hercules himself? Come on, guys! He’s way past his prime age, and it’s completely unrealistic to think that a man of his age could perform at that level without some sort of enhancement drugs. This whole idea of him being an unstoppable force in bed feels like pure fantasy, ignoring basic reality and natural human limitations.

I have always said and talked multiple times myself on the cleansing of Desai’s character but I never talked about his sexual prowess and there is a reason for that and if you truly think, you will understand the perspective of writer. I would like you to go to any story here on this site or any other literotica, you will see that cheating wife stories are filled with only one aspect, the third person who creeps between the couple if always good at bed. That’s a given per-requisite for any erotica recipe. You cannot call it out with realistic mambo jumbo, do you think a 55 yrs old can fuck like that in real life, of course not but do we need Desai to be good in bed here in this story, absolutely! So its not glorifying Desai and his stamina, it’s a requirement to write a story. So do not expect erotica in an erotica section but have the story being portrayed realistically. The problem I had with author is Nidhi’s part ,Maitherei and Ananya’s part and his character cleansing and I agree that was not necessary but when Krish_999 came back to rewrite it, I now after reading these chapters understood that to continue the story he has to subdue Nidhi as she was about to confess to Meera about Desai so he had to change the course of that path, hence Desai was given clean chit. So there is a reason why Desai was portrayed as a good person because the plot is always should come to this plot of Krish sacrificing Meera.

Once Krish sheds all the illusions and self-doubt that have clouded his mind, his true worth will shine like a precious diamond. And when that moment comes, everyone - including Meera - will realize who truly deserves to be valued.

Meera already realizes this, why do you think she still and only loves Krish and not Desai. She knows Krish's worth and she always cherishes his personality than anything. She might have an affair with many but only loved him. Even now she wants Krish to face the challenges and work on their marriage rather than give up everything. I am sure she 100% only agreed to meet and continue with Krish's plan only because Krish said its best for both of us and he won't ever change if he is with her.

Yes, his biggest flaw was his cuckold fantasies, but what’s truly remarkable is how he changed. In the last encounter between Desai and Meera, we saw a completely different Krish.
 
We do not know that yet, we will know if Krish changed or not in last chapter. One encounter where he didn't leak in his pants won't be proof enough to say he changed. What we see is his heart break that's it, if he has Meera with him today there is no guarantee that he is not old Krish. Since he saw her bond with Desai, it broke his heart and that might have made him look not a cuckold but we are yet to see complete realization from him that he is not longer cuckold. He needs to believe it in his mind that he changed then it means he changed. His consciousness need to acknowledge that he hates now to see some one being excited about Meera, that means he needs to become possessive enough to hate the concept of cuck.

Meera and Krish need to recognize this. While Krish may have his flaws, including his cuckold mentality, his heart is pure, and his love is genuine. Meera, too, must understand that a man like Desai can never provide the commitment and emotional depth she deserves. Desai is not capable of true love - he only seeks to satisfy his insatiable hunger, and when one target isn’t available, he moves to the next without remorse.
 
We do not know the plot yet for last chapter so I wouldn't judge yet on what next steps would be for Meera or Krish. We need to see Meera's decision still on her course of life in last chapter so lets wait for final episode.

~RCF

Desai’s exaggerated sexual prowess is a necessary trope in the erotica genre and should not be analyzed through a realistic lens

While erotica often follows this pattern, the problem is not just about Desai being “good in bed” but rather how the author uses it to repeatedly justify his actions and glorify his character. There’s a fine line between using a trope and excessively indulging in it to the point of unrealistic hero-worship.

Meera has always loved Krish and values him more than anyone else, despite her actions

Love without loyalty or respect is meaningless. If Meera truly values Krish, why has she been so easily manipulated by Desai multiple times? If Meera is mature, she should have seen through Desai’s manipulations earlier, not just now.


One instance of Krish not being excited (during the last encounter) isn’t enough proof that he has overcome his cuckold fantasies

 That’s a fair point, but transformation is a process. The fact that Krish is now heartbroken instead of aroused by the situation shows a shift in his mindset. The final chapter should confirm whether this change is permanent.


Reserving judgment until the final chapter is released, as Meera’s decision has not yet been made

That’s understandable, but the signs are already clear. Desai’s manipulations, Meera’s naivety, and Krish’s suffering have been ongoing themes. The resolution should bring justice to these characters rather than another forced plot twist to redeem Desai.


I appreciate your perspective, and I agree that erotica often follows certain storytelling tropes. However, my critique isn’t about whether Desai needs to be portrayed as sexually dominant - it’s about how that dominance is used to justify or excuse his repeated manipulations, which is where I think the story risks glorifying the wrong character. Yes, erotic stories often feature a powerful third party, but good storytelling should still make sense within the plot. Desai’s 'unstoppable force' portrayal isn't just a trope - it actively overshadows the emotional depth that Krish and Meera should be developing. Meera might claim to love Krish, but love is more than words - it’s choices. If she truly valued him, she would not have been so easily swayed by Desai repeatedly. At some point, emotional maturity must override desire and manipulation.

Fair point that we can’t say Krish is 'fully changed' yet. However, transformation begins with a shift in mindset. The fact that he reacted differently this time is a major step, and I hope the final chapter will cement this growth. True, we don’t know how the author will conclude this. But given everything so far, I hope justice is served to Meera and Krish instead of another forced attempt to whitewash Desai’s character.

At the end of the day, I think we both want the same thing—a satisfying and meaningful conclusion. Let’s see if the final chapter delivers on that! ☺️ Namaskar
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