30-01-2025, 09:26 PM
Alright ClearLover , I was curious on how this story goes and you have officially "SURPRISED" me. And Thank you , thank you for not taking the "cuckold" route with Kunal.
Your portrayal of Kunal's reaction and pain is clearly showcased really well in this story. His dynamic , the emotional turmoil he went through was showcased absolutely beautifully. You won't believe it but I actually cried reading Kunal's struggle with Aditya , the sudden realization for a father burdened with the duties of a single parent in the equation and Aditya's strong connection to Esha. It was such a wonderful nerve wrecking segments showcasing both Esha and Kunal's suffering. I would humbly request you to keep working on Kunal as a character and stop treating him as a token one , because in many ways there is a lot of dynamics and potential that you can explore with that character. Now that this change has happened , let this start a transformational stage for Kunal. Let this be the starting point for a new environment and setting for Kunal where he can become someone different and unique. Where in the process of improvement , he finds his identity of a better man. Seek new successes and new opportunities , change in lifestyle , tastes and way of living. Maybe that will make the bond between Aditya and Kunal grow. Let this start a single parent adventure for Kunal , where he becomes a responsible father and a dutiful parent while at the same time work on himself to become someone better. Its time for Kunal's evolution.
Another part I also liked about this chapter is how the pain and suffering of Kunal is directly correlating to a glimmer of happiness happening between Esha and Aniket and their growing romance. They are both going through the stages of early parentage. And not only these segments are signifance to Esha and Aniket's growing romance , it also gives the necessary weight to Kunal's suffering. While Esha did loose her family right now , she has a good future in front of her which she believes , and that is with Aniket and this new child. Kunal doesn't have that , for him his life turned out to be a big lie. He is suffering in silence from all the heartbreak and betrayal along with the problems developed by Aditya. I won't be surprised if Kunal one day decides to sacrifice Aditya and handover him to Esha so that he can completely isolate himself , but I also am aware that Aditya loves his father much as well.
Plus this also shows the turmoil of Esha , from her talks and her explanation it is clear that there is love for only Aniket in her life. Because in her mind she sees Aniket as the perfect partner she wanted. She believes that he is blessing in this turmoil of anguish she has created. But at the end she also confesses that she does love Kunal but in a way. Now that only leaves a glimmer of hope for Kunal and Esha to eventually reconcile but in my eyes I don't think it is possible unless Esha learns that she was manipulated into this "love" for Aniket. In that way Esha can understand that her love towards Aniket was not at all natural but was a plot from Priya's part to ruin her life. And in my opinion , I believe it should be Kunal that should expose the truth of Priya to Esha. Priya believes she has control over everything but today Kunal became the odd player and the trump card and turned the tables of manipulation and control over from Priya. And I believe in my mind that Kunal should be the unsung hero in this story and eventually reveal the truth to Esha.
Once again , I applaud you , your way of describing emotions and feelings are truely remarkable. This part , part T , is my favorite part of this whole story until now because you did a remarkable job in portraying emotions , heartbreak , betrayal , loss , turmoil , sadness , love all of these aspects wonderfully. I am now definitely looking forward for the future and I once again congratulate for an amazing update. Keep this story going and I know you're probably almost done with the whole story but please consider exploring Kunal further. He is a goldmine of a character that you can take places and really build a strong character with him.
Once again thanking you for my new favorite and incredible Part T of the story.
Harry Jordan.
Your portrayal of Kunal's reaction and pain is clearly showcased really well in this story. His dynamic , the emotional turmoil he went through was showcased absolutely beautifully. You won't believe it but I actually cried reading Kunal's struggle with Aditya , the sudden realization for a father burdened with the duties of a single parent in the equation and Aditya's strong connection to Esha. It was such a wonderful nerve wrecking segments showcasing both Esha and Kunal's suffering. I would humbly request you to keep working on Kunal as a character and stop treating him as a token one , because in many ways there is a lot of dynamics and potential that you can explore with that character. Now that this change has happened , let this start a transformational stage for Kunal. Let this be the starting point for a new environment and setting for Kunal where he can become someone different and unique. Where in the process of improvement , he finds his identity of a better man. Seek new successes and new opportunities , change in lifestyle , tastes and way of living. Maybe that will make the bond between Aditya and Kunal grow. Let this start a single parent adventure for Kunal , where he becomes a responsible father and a dutiful parent while at the same time work on himself to become someone better. Its time for Kunal's evolution.
Another part I also liked about this chapter is how the pain and suffering of Kunal is directly correlating to a glimmer of happiness happening between Esha and Aniket and their growing romance. They are both going through the stages of early parentage. And not only these segments are signifance to Esha and Aniket's growing romance , it also gives the necessary weight to Kunal's suffering. While Esha did loose her family right now , she has a good future in front of her which she believes , and that is with Aniket and this new child. Kunal doesn't have that , for him his life turned out to be a big lie. He is suffering in silence from all the heartbreak and betrayal along with the problems developed by Aditya. I won't be surprised if Kunal one day decides to sacrifice Aditya and handover him to Esha so that he can completely isolate himself , but I also am aware that Aditya loves his father much as well.
Plus this also shows the turmoil of Esha , from her talks and her explanation it is clear that there is love for only Aniket in her life. Because in her mind she sees Aniket as the perfect partner she wanted. She believes that he is blessing in this turmoil of anguish she has created. But at the end she also confesses that she does love Kunal but in a way. Now that only leaves a glimmer of hope for Kunal and Esha to eventually reconcile but in my eyes I don't think it is possible unless Esha learns that she was manipulated into this "love" for Aniket. In that way Esha can understand that her love towards Aniket was not at all natural but was a plot from Priya's part to ruin her life. And in my opinion , I believe it should be Kunal that should expose the truth of Priya to Esha. Priya believes she has control over everything but today Kunal became the odd player and the trump card and turned the tables of manipulation and control over from Priya. And I believe in my mind that Kunal should be the unsung hero in this story and eventually reveal the truth to Esha.
Once again , I applaud you , your way of describing emotions and feelings are truely remarkable. This part , part T , is my favorite part of this whole story until now because you did a remarkable job in portraying emotions , heartbreak , betrayal , loss , turmoil , sadness , love all of these aspects wonderfully. I am now definitely looking forward for the future and I once again congratulate for an amazing update. Keep this story going and I know you're probably almost done with the whole story but please consider exploring Kunal further. He is a goldmine of a character that you can take places and really build a strong character with him.
Once again thanking you for my new favorite and incredible Part T of the story.
Harry Jordan.
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