[Victorjohnson]

Why do I get a feeling you do not follow what writer is trying to say through his story, but you have been on the agenda to get things done your way lol

Your suggestions won't work esp. because you have been deviating from what is being established here...Idea is not to destroy Shipra's character but only make her submissive to a point when if she realizes how far low she went there is not much she could do as after that point, it would be ordeal for her to do the bidding for Patode or others.

To go there, the writer’s idea is to peel her well-crafted barriers of marriage one by one as you peel onion layers. If you have read the story, Shipra was dominating right from the beginning with Patode as he is her subordinate, and now he has broken her a little and he has a complete upper hand with her, and now he has to further peel more layers before she is truly submissive before he feeds her to others.

I wonder when his recordings and blackmail will come into picture with Shipra and her first encounter with Toppo should be epic as Toppo is the main person who has been behind her for years and his yearning for her has reached peaks and her ordeal with him will be something else to read if it’s long and thorough.

So, I suggest reading and enjoying the story than trying to make the writer write to your definitions of destruction.  

~RCF

Firstly since I like this story I am taking time to type and put my comments...secondly if u want to make someone submissive, we should destroy their individuality, degrade them, make them enjoy the degrades and make them get used to it and transform to it... So I feel writer could have used the method which I told rather than the one which he is using now... Also slapping a woman I dnt think so can make her submissive ... Anyway this is my thought, I said ...it is the author's call to take or leave it....anyway I appreciate ur reply because this will give encouragement to post more updates