Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[RCF]

To be frank today's update was just average one for me ...

Reason

1. Pouring patode sperm into shipra womanhood was given high importance in this story...It didn't connect me at all because shipra is not illiterate not to know about i-pill with which she can prevent from pregnancy... Usually woman forget it due to pleasure or belief...but in this case, shipra was aware Abt pregnancy so I dnt think giving importance to this is of any value.. A WOMAN READY TO REMOVE MANGALSUTRA FEELS BAD TO TAKE I PILL AND PATODE HAD TO GIVE HER ...ALL TAT WAS BUT CRINGE I FELT

2.  Secondly shipra never gave permission to patode to pour his sperm inside her . Patode had to be rude to make things done .. This according to me was not appreciable because patode had already controlled shipra ..so there was no use for him to be angry... Slap given to Shipra was nt at all needed

However namrata character was brilliant...kudos for tat 
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Still let me  tell you bro, please concentrate on destroying shipra character rather than just hurting her through slap or violence....

Why do I get a feeling you do not follow what writer is trying to say through his story, but you have been on the agenda to get things done your way lol

Your suggestions won't work esp. because you have been deviating from what is being established here...Idea is not to destroy Shipra's character but only make her submissive to a point when if she realizes how far low she went there is not much she could do as after that point, it would be ordeal for her to do the bidding for Patode or others.

To go there, the writer’s idea is to peel her well-crafted barriers of marriage one by one as you peel onion layers. If you have read the story, Shipra was dominating right from the beginning with Patode as he is her subordinate, and now he has broken her a little and he has a complete upper hand with her, and now he has to further peel more layers before she is truly submissive before he feeds her to others.

I wonder when his recordings and blackmail will come into picture with Shipra and her first encounter with Toppo should be epic as Toppo is the main person who has been behind her for years and his yearning for her has reached peaks and her ordeal with him will be something else to read if it’s long and thorough.

So, I suggest reading and enjoying the story than trying to make the writer write to your definitions of destruction.  

~RCF