27-01-2025, 06:23 PM
(This post was last modified: 27-01-2025, 06:43 PM by Phoenix2025. Edited 3 times in total. Edited 3 times in total.)
(27-01-2025, 05:41 PM)RCF Wrote: Thanks for your kind words and good to see you coming out to express your views.
Your thought process and details in comment is very good. One correction though from my perspective is to have Meera realize and choose one of Krish or Desai based on her feelings rather than knowing Desai is bad, Meera's choice should be for love not for choosing good apple after knowing about other bad apple, if you know what I mean here, Choice should be for good reasons and good future. No matter what Desai or Krish thinks about her or her relationships here, she should stand for her own reasons and her thoughts.
~RCF
Thank you for your thoughtful response!
However, throughout the chapters, Desai hasn’t been exposed yet and still holds a gentleman’s image in the eyes of Krish and Meera. Considering what he did to Nidhi when Krish was injured—exploiting her for his own pleasure - it feels like the perfect time to reveal his manipulative and cunning nature. It would be ideal if both Krish and Meera uncover the truth about Desai, understand the real issues, and tear apart his facade.
At the same time, I think it would be great to show Meera making her decision based on her own emotions and clarity about her love for Krish. A mix of these ideas could create a balance - Meera standing strong in her love and exposing Desai’s true colors, leading to a heartfelt reconciliation between Krish and Meera.
Just my wish, though - the author knows best! I'm sure the ending will be thrilling and satisfying.
Thanks again, RCF, for your wonderful thoughts and response. Cheers! ☺️
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