Adultery The Facilitator

[Harry Jordan]

Kunal is a big fool because, he has not noticed

- the love bites in his wife body
- Change in her behavior
- Late arrivals 
- the smell of scent of Aniket
- new dresses that he did not buy for her
- her mood of lost thoughts often
- no interest in the mating
- too much of time in phone
- secret chats with aniket
- uncaring attitude towards child
- her structure change mating with Aniket
- ignoring him most of time

The answer to all this is very simple , Kunal is a very poorly written character. 

To be honest , that is the real truth because there isn't much importance to the character. The story treats him like a token character , there is no exploration of him , no building to his character dynamic. Hell , we are way past halfway of this entire story and we still don't know what exactly is Kunal's profession. At some point Kunal is shown like he is just a common man who risked everything to buy his dream house for his family selling majority of his shares , but at the same time he often frequents places like USA regarding his "job"so there is no way he is just a "common man".

Only thing we know so far about Kunal is that he is a simple man who believes in simple concepts , isn't that much interested in sex but more in family time.  Not that good looking , has the mid life married man physical features including a pot belly and a bland look. He loves his son and he never has an aspiring dream for his life. And conveniently , he is still trapped in his marriage living the same boring life while his wife is "liberated"

And judging by the story , there is no importance to his character anyways. He is being conveniently written to the story to fill a slot of a loser , we are not supposed to care for him , he is meant to loose. Because if he was important to the story he would've had a big role to play , but there isn't. For the last few chapters he was completely absent from the story , and now he is being brought back to do the usual role of a "cuckold loser" in the story. He is the ideal poster boy of the  "cliche cuckold" that you see in every cuckold story , the person meant for humiliation , someone meant to be unconditionally love his wife despite of her cheating on him to the point that she will now be raising a child concieved from her lover. 

My interest was in peak to this story until chapter R and then chapter S came and I realized what the author mean't not everyone will like this story. Because I can see how this story will go , and I can see how Kunal's character will be written in the future. But still I have some faith in ClearLover and I would love it if he brings some great surprises to the story. 

The reason I have lost interest in this story since chapter S is because I saw some great potential in Kunal's character. Now after chapter S , I honestly don't care what happens to him. I am just looking forward to how this story ends and thats it. Unless there is some amazing twist , this story might end up in the long list of cliche cuckold story that this site already has. However , I still applaud the writer's literary style and would like to see him explore other themes other than "looser cuckold" stories.