26-01-2025, 06:12 AM
(26-01-2025, 12:04 AM)DeanWinchester00007 Wrote: Man , To be Honest . I like the ending . You should have add one more chapter to show the build up , The planning phase and the training phase of Husband in Jail . It felt rushed but I understand your reasoning behind it . Never Mind I loved .
And the twist in the END , SNEHA . Man , The Kid though He is man now still in danger. I guess sajida and Rahim is alive so they might go after him . I hope , Santosh had already prepared the Rajesh's kid to handle these SCUM .
Waiting for your Next Story !
Having known the full story of Rajesh, Santhosh should have prepared Aarav to face sajida and rahim type of people. Definitely he is not like his father and he has a well toned body that is strong enough to fuck the brains out of any woman. Hope the epilogue explains it better rather than ending this man as a loser.
